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If I Could Be

If I could be the brook, I’d sing to you If I could be the trees, I would wave If I could be the sky, I’d create clouds of hearts to see Dashed with pink with every sunset to be If I could be the wind, I’d carry your kites Or tickle you with cool breeze on hot summer nights If I could be the sunflowers, I’d sway with smiles Whatever it may be, I’d spread love for miles Heidi Sands 11/26/22

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Date: 11/27/2022 2:14:00 PM
If I could write reviews for a Poetry Magazine, I'd give you an A++! Thanks, Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2022 2:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon! Blessings :)
Date: 11/26/2022 1:27:00 PM
Endearing sentiments, Heidi. Enjoyed the uplifting voice of your poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2022 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 11/26/2022 12:43:00 PM
Brilliant poem. Well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2022 1:28:00 PM
Thank you Jeanette :)
Date: 11/26/2022 12:03:00 PM
So lovely and beautifully penned! Heidi. Thanks for sharing and for your comment on my page.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2022 12:11:00 PM
Thank you and you are welcome :)
Date: 11/26/2022 10:37:00 AM
This made me smile, especially the line about the wind carrying the kites~
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/26/2022 10:40:00 AM
I am happy it brought a smile. Thank you Michelle :)

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