Get Your Premium Membership

If I Am Your Jack, You Are My Jill

I will be your Jack if you will be my Jill. To fetch a pail of water, we can always walk up that hill. A feeling of love is something I can't take in a pill. I shall have natural love for you if reciprocation is your will. My love will grow in your soil which is fertile enough to till. Your presence around me is enough to give me a thrill. Inspired by another member's poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/8/2014 8:23:00 PM
Hello Robert - Thanks for stopping by to read my poem. I enjoyed your new and heartfelt version of "Jack and Jill."
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2014 9:33:00 PM
wow, you are getting inspired by other poets left and right. Another great poem from you!
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs