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The reed - his voice, “Gypsy, my darling flirt, you dangle charms - a floral scent, my heart. In revolution play, your cloud of skirt.” The reed - his voice, “Gypsy, my darling flirt, proud, I am — you pop buttons from my shirt. O clarinet, I follow beauty’s chart.” The reed - his voice, “Gypsy, my darling flirt, you dangle charms - a floral scent, my heart. In revolution play, your cloud of skirt.” The reed - his voice, “Gypsy, my darling flirt, proud, I am — you pop buttons from my shirt. O clarinet, I follow beauty’s chart… You dangle charms - a floral scent, my heart… My voice will break, if ever we should part.” 6/15/2021 WRITE A "TRIONET" FOR ME Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins SUBMIT A TWO-STANZA poem only. The first stanza will follow the rules for a standard triolet of eight (8) lines ABaAabAB (capital letters are repeated lines). The second stanza will consist of six (6) lines, formed with five (5) lines repeated from the first stanza and adding an appropriate non-repeated rhyming last line. * picture from pixabay

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Date: 6/28/2021 9:53:00 PM
You've followed all the rules required to be followed and put together such a romantic sonnet, well done dear poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2021 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/19/2021 11:15:00 AM
Wow! Stunning. Beautiful -- romantically enchanting!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2021 8:10:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 6/18/2021 7:35:00 PM
Very romantic! <3 My dad was a romantic sweetheart to my mother. He always liked to refer to my mom as a 'gypsy' because our family moved quite often. Honestly, though he was a Frenchman, it his that was the heart of a gypsy! they loved to travel, but it was him who would decide it was time to head west, then back east, then SW and she loved it as much as him. She loved him and enjoyed the wonderful journey of their lives together. This brought them back to my mind. I love your poem <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2021 4:08:00 AM
So glad that the poem brought back such happy memories and thank you for sharing with me! Thank you!
Date: 6/18/2021 11:31:00 AM
Charm and romantic intrigue abound in this captivating sonnet, Kim. Best wishes for the contest. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2021 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 6/16/2021 1:06:00 PM
This is so enchanting, Kim. It really captures that flamenco spirit as well. I got to see gypsies in caves in the time i spent years ago in Spain , and wow, it's so nice to see them during festival time with the romantic music and costumes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2021 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so much! It must have been nice to see the festival! Hugs
Date: 6/15/2021 10:21:00 PM
There's romance in the air and it will not go away but lives forever. Lovely poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/16/2021 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs!
Date: 6/15/2021 5:51:00 PM
Don't know quite why, but this reminds me so much of 'The Scarlet Pimpernel!' Go figure. Anyway, that's a good thing! Cheers, Kim.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/17/2021 7:57:00 PM
Well, You could read the book. It's terrific. After about page 60, you just can't put it down. Seriously ~ Just sayin'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2021 6:47:00 PM
I know the name but I don’t think I’ve watched the movie. Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/15/2021 12:26:00 PM
Captivating writing that meets the challenge, my dearest friend, Kim! Good luck! Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2021 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 6/15/2021 11:38:00 AM
You rose well to the challenge well Kim, well composed, ive now got a flamenco dancer in my head. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2021 6:48:00 PM
Glad I conjured up an image! :)
Date: 6/15/2021 10:11:00 AM
Wonderfully penned! Impressive! All the best for contest. Should place high. A winner for me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/15/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Rama! :)

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