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VOICE: Ahmad Razvi
I write a few words every day A few words Sometimes not even words Just to remember what it feels like Elk ilk This is a pen This is paper These are little drawings Raw wings Only a few you can arrange and rearrange Rear gear and then the meaning changes It's a miracle Clam realm I write some of them To not forget Forge fog I arrange name mane If I don't write I might forget my name. If I forget my name Forge my poetry Pry me open Pen my words Worthy am I Write my me. *** January 14, 2017

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Date: 1/14/2017 3:57:00 PM
Very charming wordplay, Darren. The simplicity of expression is pure elegance. Lovely poem, esp the ending. Love and peace to you.
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 8:52:00 PM
Thank you Freddie. It was indeed meant to bring a smile to your face :)
Date: 1/14/2017 7:30:00 AM
That's a delight to read - love how you used the words :*
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 8:01:00 AM
It's fun, wordplay ;)
Date: 1/14/2017 6:36:00 AM
A joy to read ...
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 7:30:00 AM
Thank you, Probir :)
Date: 1/14/2017 5:47:00 AM
I'll always remember your name, Duir! It's so wonderful how you deliver your messages!
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Darren White
Date: 1/14/2017 7:30:00 AM
Thank you Budgie :) I won't forget yours either!

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