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Written 26 July 2025

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Three Options in I Poetry Contest

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Idyllic

The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched - they must be felt with the heart."  Hellen Keller  

Snow-tipped mountains ranged around the prairie,
Small rivulets wavered down the steep sides,
Spreading nutriments, flourishing flowers.

   Bright red poppies, and yellow celandines
   Swayed all around, as a balmy breeze blew.
   Aiding agile grey geese gracefully glide.
   Above the shade of a cluster of oaks.

A few old men tended a flock of sheep,
Most chewed unleavened bread, nibbling on cheese.
Till to a tavern they'd go, to drink beer.

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Fowler Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Love your subtle alliterations dear Victor. Congratulations! :)
La France Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 6:16 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Three Options in I contest, I love your image and quote and your words are so beautifully penned, blessings ~
Williams Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 7:35 AM
Dearest Victor a beautiful poem, I'm thrilled it was placed first. A huge congratulations my friend...Hugs
Singh Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Like your quotation from Helen Keller.Yours is a beautiful nature poem.Congratulations on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:34 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Have a blessed day with your win................
Rodgers Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Dear Victor, Oh my I felt like I dropped gently into a pastoral painting, where time slows, colors soften, and the soul exhales. There's a quiet reverence in your lines, a kind of grounded beauty that comes not from grand gestures, but from noticing, the way geese glide, the way old men chew bread in rhythm with the land. Excellent Poem! Summer Blessings, Dear Victor, Daniel
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 9:25 PM
So serene and lovely and the sanctity of peaceful comradery makes this the perfect poetic masterpiece of absolute beauty. I love it!!
Seeker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:09 PM
A poem from you without a dreamy kiss? Hope you are feeling well ;) congratulations on your win, Victor
Edmonds  Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:29 PM
A lovely poem Victor, pleased you are up with the winners… Beryl (see Soupmail)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Love the chosen quote! Love the scene you depicted. Beauty all around, but also a nibble and companionship! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 10:12 AM
- A beautiful picture with your words... truly idyllic, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 5:05 AM
Victor, a beautiful poem and imagery.
George Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 2:50 AM
Rustic scenes and rustic life are equally energising and beautiful. Who wouldn't love the countryside with snow tipped mountains, gurgling rivulets and shepherds tending sheep ! Lovely poem.
Buehler Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:49 PM
This poem portrays a place that seems like paradise. I loved reading about this idyllic spot; and the beautiful picture, with its winding stream, is a fine companion. :)
Godwin Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:59 PM
Hey, good looking. The picture appeals to me so much that added to your BEAUTIFUL poetic lines, I simply have to get small or whatever to live in that picture. That's what I want to do. My little girl imagination soared at the pic, my woman loved the words, so I have to go! You are welcome to get small and visit me in Idyllic land anytime. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 4:16 PM
you've beautifully captured the essence of 'idyllic.' This seems like a true winner in my mind. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
Rose  Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 2:59 PM
I can see it all with my mind's eye Victor, I see a winner here, :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 11:37 AM
What a lovely write you have here. Love Your Pretty Picture.... "Good Luck" Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 11:29 AM
Nicely done, Victor. You found an excellent picture to accompany it
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 11:09 AM
Ahhh!! Living life to the fullest. Creative work. Thanks for sharing..Sara K
Winter Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:12 AM
A very beautiful picturesque write! Brilliant alliteration! Love this!
Manassian Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 7:00 AM
Good to read this lovely piece Oh to be there to see it in person. It would restore the soul.
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 6:56 AM
Excellent imagery Victor, i especially loved the liberal sprinkling of alliteration - my fave lines is about the grey geese:- so glad to see you back you have been missed:-) hugs jan xx
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:52 AM
Dearest Victor, such a vivid, serene snapshot of nature and simple life. I could almost feel the breeze and see the poppies sway. The old men tending sheep and ending their day with beer adds a warm, timeless touch. Beautifully captured. Good luck in the contest...hugs
Poet Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:07 AM
A charming rural setting is captured in your superb poem, Victor, illustrating the balance between the natural world and the modest lifestyles of its people. It highlights the peacefulness of pastoral life and the beauty of the landscape.
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