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Idella's Gift

There are smells and sights and tastes which always remind of Grandma with her rows of flowers bright, the red of poppy the gladiolas white, the blue of spring violets vain the scent of lilacs in the air and pine needles in the mix. Sometimes too, the memory of her sweet breath does rise of Black Jack gum or peppermint and all those summer times. The search for new spout dandelions the mushrooms other times And summer’s end brought black blue teeth a blueberry’s remind. We’d dig for bait with cans of tin, Idella, grandma mine, and rise from ‘neath the patched quilts of calico so bright. By chance to fish within the stream, trout in our breakfast mix along with silly shaped pancakes so placed on china vain. The beauty of her sky blues eyes never was so vain that wisps of salt and pepper hair gave time its only claim. To rise like yeast a child within this mix to hear a bark of terrier and feel Babe’s tongue remind of childhood days a Grandma’s house. Idella our bright find. Take those blessed tender hands and rise Touch childhood cheek like dough of white and rise have no dark dwelling thoughts of blue blood in the vein the thinness of her fragile skin the dimmed light so bright just remember love full of the better times. And with the scent of venison and sizzling pans remind laced with home made butter, fried onions in the mix. How had Idella’s loveliness from German bloodlines mixed together with the stalwart Grandpa Trussell’s rise to birth the lively bunch of child my Mom’s remind? When in the dark of night the rush of red rolls through my vein mind light flies and flickers like the candle flame of time and I return on winged horse within a dream so bright. Smell the wood smoke from the stove caste iron bright. See the siblings teasing cat and dog within the mix. The mantle clock’s brass pendulum sings in time. Hear the winter wind blow through the rafter’s rise like tucked in chicks the storms blew all in vain, now only grand kids live these tales and do remind. Always in the darkest times I think of my Idella bright and Gram reminds me of both joy and sorrow’s mix soon like the wind on weathervane I'll rise to heaven and her kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/10/2010 10:46:00 AM
Very moving poem, Deborah. A sweet, gentle melody flows through this one. I have submitted a "yellow polka-dot bikini" poem for your contest. I guess this is where I sign up for it. I was a bit confused. Getting old, I guess, and been worried about Rhonda. Latest word is it's not looking so good. I'll let you know when I have more details. Dane Ann talked to her briefly last night after her surgery. Carol B. is trying to locate state help for her post-surgery recovery. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading about your grandmother and the lovely characteristic that made her who she was..To be honest I have forgotten about the form for Sestina so I do not know if you followed the form...You created a poem that has descriptiveness and expressiveness...Enjoyed..Going from here to get an assignment to write a poem.Oh "The Streak" if it is still open...Sara
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Date: 8/6/2010 12:51:00 AM
I don't know how we could be such opposites Debbie, everything you say about your Grandma Idella reminds me of my Granny Dunolap New. Her favorite flowers, her smell, the the smell of all th other things that remind you of her. All the little things. The friendship quilts she made for all her granchildren. The fresh venison smell and the taste, made special by her. Mainly the fact I would never have known what Love was without my Grnny. Let me know if Pink Shoelaces is open. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 2:17:00 PM
OK are we receiving an answer to our choices for the contest before I go ahead and write on the bikini piece? lots of emotion as I reread this Sestina ... I had a grandma Nicola .. and she sounds like her twin... so please answer if my choice is acceptable oh great TEACH..humble pupil..luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:23:00 AM
I claim "The Streak" Debbie!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:39:00 AM
OK..what else would I choose.. can I have the Itsby Bitsy Teenoe Weenie Yellow Polka Dot Bikini? u knew I would pick that didn't u TEACH? so let me know OK.. I see Joyce wants it also..luv..pupil..
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:28:00 AM
I claim Itsy Bitsie Teeny Weeny Yellow polka dot bikini. That song has been running through my head for years. I also have all the memories of wood stoves, flowers, gardens and summer that you speak of in your Sestina.
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Date: 8/5/2010 7:13:00 AM
Andrea has Dietrich has commented below and Claims TEEN ANGEL for the Summertime Contest. She is the first poet to claim this song..2 more may!
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Date: 8/4/2010 12:54:00 PM
I have been trying all morning to make comments and was having so much trouble. Looks like things are better now. congratulations on your poem and big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/4/2010 12:08:00 PM
Im late with my comments..what a wonderful piece about someone that touched your life in so many ways. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "Even A Name Can Be Poetry'. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:30:00 AM
A grand poem dear. Love the end. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/3/2010 9:04:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Constance's contest with these wonderful words with great presentation ... lovely piece.. enjoy TEACH.. pupil..with luv..
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Date: 8/3/2010 8:56:00 PM
Wow! You really put yourself into this one! Congrats non your second place win!
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Date: 8/3/2010 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Deborah, on second place in my contest, Even A Name Can Be Poetry ~~ I think you did a fantastic job writing this Sestina ~ I know this is not an easy form to write in and you did an excelllent job ~~
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Date: 8/2/2010 3:10:00 AM
Lovely poetry so vivid with nice imagery, Deborah! And thank you for commenting "Tanzend". There was not enough space left to join the German version with the Spanish and English one so I had to post it separately. I got a German keyboard where you have ö,ü and ä on it as separate letters. Have a nice week!...Love, Gert
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Date: 7/30/2010 10:54:00 PM
I really like how you tied it all up at the end here, Deb. You sure have become enamored of these sestinas!! They are too long, in my opinion. Both to write and to read. Have you ever tried a tritina? They are like the small version of these. anyway,you are really good at these! YOu should look into sestina contests that might be out there. Surely they are somewhere!! LUv, Andrea PS did you know that your second poem is not showing a title to click on in your lineup of poetry?
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Date: 7/30/2010 6:57:00 PM
Thanks for the comment on my poetry ~ I just love this sestnia ~ no one does a Sestina like you ~
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Date: 7/30/2010 4:29:00 PM
How are you doing, D.G.!!!Nice nice, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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