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Ida Rentoul Outhwaite The Wave

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there's commonality with a pencil line it could be anything just as the sea could swallow me up the pencil could place me back in the scene I'm the tiny fragments on the mist that settle into a form trying then to fathom what it is to exist at all wash me away, to ebb and flow always to end up back here the arch, back

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/30/2024 9:39:00 PM

I read a picture in this poem. Experience leads to art. I enjoyed it.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/30/2024 11:04:00 PM

Thanks Hilda, I used to post them without the pictures at first with just the name and artist. It can be an interesting game to see what you imagine before looking it up x

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/30/2024 4:21:00 PM

Great observation-- should be framed and hung right below the sketch, Dilly!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/30/2024 11:03:00 PM

Thanks Anaya - I find these kinds of drawing so interesting.