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I Write Upon the Mirror

I write upon the mirror of youth’s pizzazzy. Stunning, clear, ravishing - the Spring of life. Enjoy the pure lilt of her eyes. She can handle close-ups. Boys praise unblemished frame with no experience. Tan-Summer glow draws herself a husband. I write upon the mirror of my Autumn brand. Her wrinkles letting go of each pretense. Wine cascades into grateful cup, dispenses with the lies. Snuggles with spouse - let’s go of bitterness and strife. Frees herself, uninhibited, jazzy. I write upon the Winter mirror of esprit. She’s looking forward to the afterlife. With tears in eyes says her goodbyes. Endearing - the close-ups of kith and kin warmth. See! There’s no need for defense. Tell heaven, her life has been grand. 2/2/2021 My Invented Form - I Write Upon Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France 12/10/8/6/12/10 syllable lines each stanza abcdef fedcba abcdef HMS, RhymeZone and PS Grammar Checker * *Merriam-Webster includes pizzazzy. **After the first lines in each verse, the mirror speaks

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Date: 2/15/2021 10:14:00 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2021 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 2/15/2021 9:24:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest, I Write Upon, using my Invented Form, your poem is wonderful _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2021 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! I enjoyed using your invented form!
Date: 2/3/2021 8:57:00 AM
So lovely Kim...we all have different ways to write upon...your ways are just uniquely yours. Best wishes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2021 5:35:00 PM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 2/2/2021 9:14:00 PM
You're a very gifted poet! Great write
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2021 6:06:00 AM
<3 Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 2/2/2021 6:10:00 PM
What a fantastic write, my poetic friend! So romantically penned.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2021 6:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend!

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