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I Wonder, For AM

A pale stream that feeds on twisted pallor— sworn, it never sinks; as tears fall for colored morn—thus done by the Maker Artist— to mar lack. I dreamt in scars; before fiery dawn wind came for me within; so hit my heart; bid rise!

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Date: 7/10/2023 11:28:00 AM
Pretty amazing Paige. Wonderful lines -"twisted pallor" in particular along with "dreamt in scars." These images really stand out! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you!
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Date: 7/8/2023 11:25:00 AM
First 4 lines paint a picture! Nice!
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Date: 7/7/2023 9:17:00 PM
A beautiful etheree ! Have a great weekend dear Paige !
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