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I Wish I Understood

I don’t believe we’ll meet again, And find it hard to hide the pain. The thought of her drives me insane. I’ve lost her love for good - Apologies are just in vain. I wish I understood! For Dr Ram's Rime Couee contest

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Date: 10/10/2011 12:02:00 AM
Recovery is on the way dear friend, we need you!
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Date: 7/20/2011 2:00:00 PM
Sometimmes all there is to understand is that it's over. Sometimes we owe one apology too many. Sometimes they are the one who is at fault. Doesn't matter really what does it. When it's over that all there is. Time to move on because with or without that person, Lif Goes ON. Great write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:33:00 PM
Dear Jack, I'm so happy to see this awesome poem in the winners' circle. (My AOL mail has been down today.) Congratulations, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/12/2011 7:16:00 AM
Jack, a great presentation and an honorable win. Congratulations, friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/12/2011 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations Jack on your win in the "Rime Couee" contest of Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:51:00 PM
Very well done Jack. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congrats jack on another excellent win using new form with very expressive words my friend.. enjoy another wonderful victory with luv..
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:07:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, jack
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Date: 7/4/2011 11:22:00 AM
very touching piece. thank you for commenting on Three Baby birds.
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Date: 7/4/2011 5:27:00 AM
Very deep emotional verse, Jack. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest., and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
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Date: 7/3/2011 6:33:00 PM
Where have you been btw? It's good to see you posting something new. Did you like this form? Breakups are harder when we don't even know what we did wrong. I like how you captured the helplessness. good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/3/2011 3:31:00 PM
fantastic Jack.. great words of passion and pain in the new form ..for the contest..good luck luv.. great job ..
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Date: 7/3/2011 3:11:00 PM
Hi, good luck to you, Jack, in the contest. I enjoyed the poem, only I don't get what the last line means.
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Date: 7/3/2011 3:06:00 PM
very nice good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/3/2011 3:05:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Good luck..I hope that your love is not lost...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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