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I Wish I Could See

I wish I could see The man in the moon He always has a smile I wish I could see The big dipper star I wish I could see The milky way spilled I wish I could see The rainbow up close All colors would be bright I ponder if the pot of gold will be there I wish I could see How the winds looks like I ponder if the odd cloud would look I wish I could see How the winds looks I wonder if it is an odd cloud I wish I could see Everything up close It would be pleasant

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Joe Dimino

Date: 9/15/2021 11:13:00 AM

Wow! Read this, and now I am looking at everything...with new eyes. Out of sight! Love it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/15/2021 3:38:00 PM

Hello Joe DiMino, when I look up to the sky I wonder about these things. I am also looking at everything. thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 9/6/2021 7:21:00 AM

A playful romp reminiscent of childhood days when laying on the grass staring up at the clouds, and sharing our imaginations out loud.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2021 10:06:00 AM

Hello Denis, yes it is a reminiscent of childhood. I always wonder. Enjoy your day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/20/2021 1:15:00 AM

I really like this poem but especially this line "there I wish I could see How the winds looks like"

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2021 10:56:00 AM

Hello Caren, Thank you Caren, I like that line to. Hugs .

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/13/2021 4:27:00 AM

I am shortsighted and know the feeling. But poetry gives me lenses ...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2021 3:45:00 PM

Hello Michael kai Neumann, Oh I am pleased that poetry gives you lenses. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/12/2021 7:50:00 AM

thank you Darlene for this lovely poem. Nancy

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2021 9:56:00 AM

Hello Nancy, you are very welcome my friend. Enjoy your day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/10/2021 11:19:00 AM

What a beautiful write Darlene your imagination is on fire - truly a brilliant poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2021 3:25:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, yes my imagination works well for me in poetry. thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/9/2021 5:27:00 PM

Hello Darlene ... I enjoyed your verse Darlene. For centuries us humans have gazed at the heavens with the same wishes as in your verse - thank you Darlene - Lindsay

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/10/2021 4:44:00 AM

Hello Laurie Lindsay, Thank you Laurie for a lovely comment. I gaze at the heavens and I wonder the same thing. Enjoy your day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/8/2021 8:37:00 AM

I think you can. Merely look to your imagination where all things may be viewed with great clarity. Thanks for your visit to my latest piece.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2021 6:19:00 AM

Hello Richard, yes I do look at my imagination often for my poetry. Yet sometimes my ghost writer awakes me up and gives me an idea for poetry. You are welcome Richard. enjoy your day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2021 5:07:00 PM

I like the consistency of this one Darlene; it was pleasant to read.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/8/2021 7:28:00 AM

Hello Caren. thank you Caren, for the lovely comment. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2021 12:59:00 PM

Precious poem. I enjoy reading this style!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2021 3:31:00 PM

Hello Andrea, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/6/2021 7:35:00 PM

Lovely poem, Darlene - your expressions are so warm, so close to heart! Love and hugs, My Friend ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2021 10:43:00 AM

Hello Mala, Thank you Mala, for a lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Love & Friendship.

Emilia James

Date: 8/6/2021 10:27:00 AM

Lovely poem Darlene, would be lovely to see these things a little closer, Emilia.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2021 3:15:00 PM

Hello Emilia, yes it would be nice to see these things closer. i agree. enjoy your evening my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/6/2021 5:12:00 AM

I enjoyed this Darlene. Very nice :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2021 10:25:00 AM

Hello Heidi, Thank you Heidi. Hugs.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/6/2021 2:08:00 AM

It would be so nice to feel the soul of Nature dear Darlene... Beautifully penned poem... Hugs... ~ Ani

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2021 10:24:00 AM

Hello Anitha, yes Anitha, it would be nice to feel the soul of nature. I agree. Hugs xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/5/2021 8:46:00 PM

Darlene! One of your best! Great, how you think! Making this a FAVORITE. Pangie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2021 10:23:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, Thank you. Oh! thank you for the fav. Hugs xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2021 11:25:00 AM

- ... there's a meaning to everything, Darlene ... we have to enjoy it from a distance :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2021 3:47:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, I believe that to Sunshine Smile. Hugs.

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/5/2021 10:44:00 AM

Sometimes when we close our eyes we can see much clearer. Great poem Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2021 11:07:00 AM

Hello Mark Koplin, Yes I agree we can see clearly when our eyes are closed. Enjoy your day my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/4/2021 11:49:00 AM

i THINK YOU COULD BE ON THE OTHER SIDE LOOKING IN. I think they would smile at you when they see the beautiful face and vision before them too. Mirror mirror, :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2021 12:26:00 PM

Hello mystic Rose, Rose, I do think i am on the other side of the mirror looking in. Enjoyyour day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/4/2021 11:30:00 AM

"I Wish I Could See" is a wonderful write. Love It. There many things I wish I could see. Have a great/blessed day..............

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2021 11:48:00 AM

Hello Paula Goldsmith, thank you paula. What is it that you wish you could see? Just wondering. enjoy your day my friend.

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/4/2021 10:23:00 AM

Our world is amazing Darlene and your desire to fully absorb its beauty has also made a beautiful poem!! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2021 11:51:00 AM

Hello Mike Gentile, oh thank you so much Mike for this w wonderful comment. enjoy your day my friend. xx-oo.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/4/2021 5:56:00 AM

A poem full of wonder, lovely Darlene....Delice

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2021 6:26:00 AM

Hello Delice, thank you for the lovely comment. It wouod be wonderful to cures for these illness. Enjoy your day my friend.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/4/2021 12:11:00 AM

Lovely wishes...I enjoyed reading them...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2021 5:54:00 AM

Hello Kannan Supraja, so nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/3/2021 11:25:00 PM

one thing you don't need to wish for is wonderful poetry, it's already here i've just read one.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2021 5:55:00 AM

Hello Harry Horseman, oh, thank you. Enjoy your day my friend.