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I Will Break Free- For Titles Contest

“I’m Strong Enough!” “How Dare You" think otherwise! “This moment,” I've come to realize, “I’m Worth it.” So, “Cry and Scream” all you want. “I’m Going Away.” “Tranquility Beckons” and “A Time to Love,” for me has finally come. “Don’t Ever think I've Forgotten” how “You Branded Me" With “Scarlet Letters” you wrote on my heart, ”Unloved.” With your “Leftover love," I will never be "Satiated" “Unable to Sleep,” I dream of “Making love”- a "Euphoria" lasting a “Thousand and One Nights." But, “My Lips are Sealed.” No longer will I plead… “Nothing Matters Anymore," for your “Fatal Flaw” is “Exposed.” “There Must be a Punishment” for what you've done. Now, you will see “The Warrior Princess" in me Today, “I will Break Free!” It’s All in the Titles Contest By Adam Hapsworth

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Date: 5/1/2015 8:20:00 AM
Nope I edited my one from yesterday, I was not fully satisfied with it.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/1/2015 8:26:00 AM
I was going to point out two words, but other than that....it was amazing. I really really liked it. I hope you didn't change much. Hugs
Date: 5/1/2015 8:12:00 AM
I just sent him a soup mail. Over the last year I have stopped by and left him comments from time to time to let him know he hasn't been forgotten.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/1/2015 8:14:00 AM
That's just the kind of man you are, Richard....AMAZING! ;) Hugs....He finally posted on my poem entitled RICHARD D SEAL that I entered into the contest...so that was nice! Did you post something new today?
Date: 5/1/2015 8:01:00 AM
Richard posted a few poems, I left some comments but he never responded. This poem was really well done Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/1/2015 8:09:00 AM
Yes, I saw the poems he posted. It's good he is posting again. I saw that he hasn't responded. Perhaps in time. Thanks so much for visiting me, Richard. I'm always glad when you come around. You are the only one who CONSISTENTLY visits me. You don't know how much that means, especially now as I'm not writing. Thanks! HUGS
Date: 8/22/2013 3:13:00 PM
You have created a very lovely and moving poem with all of these great titles. Wonderful creativity :)
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Date: 8/19/2013 6:39:00 AM
I have been away for awhile my friend.But I see you've been quite busy.I would definitely try to catch up on the ones I missed out on reading.By the way,great write.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2013 10:17:00 AM
Mustapha! Hi! Yes, I have been busy...I'm on holiday now...so, I have MORE time on my hands. I can't get enough of poetry! Thanks for visiting and the compliment! :)
Date: 8/18/2013 2:30:00 AM
I like Richards comment but I love your poem!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 1:22:00 PM
Glad that you love my poem, Richard....You have produced some fine ones yourself..TWO, I might add...with the second having a catchy title as well! :)
Date: 8/17/2013 5:29:00 PM
This is a Titletanic write my little Desert Orchid, great job you've made of your titles. Go Xena, go Xena lol Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 1:21:00 PM
:) Why thank you, Mr Seal...what a lovely post! :) Xena will be kind to you and not harsh since you have praised her well! :) Titletanic....cute!
Date: 8/17/2013 8:50:00 AM
BRILLIANT my dear sweet Teach! What a great write! Have posted over 750 poems since joining... none as good as yours... this is as good as it gets! Big huggeroones xoxoxox
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/17/2013 8:53:00 AM
Oh...my dear sweet Kenny! You are way too kind to me! :) Thanks, though! Coming your way right now! :) HUGGEROONES back at ya!

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