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fluffy clouds sail across the azure and I drink from the deep blue where birds fly I was thirsty, oh so thirsty for spring listen, the birds have a new song so lovely are the daffodils, tulips and crocus oh, sweet the lush lilac's drooping and I love the sunlit puddles and kittens . . . in my garden purple violets are pushing to be free and yesterday a butterfly came to visit the trees have put away their winter gowns and now stand vibrant in shades of green peaceful is a robin bathing in the rain and scampering squirrels run and dash . . . everything is awakening with promise a shiny new washes away the dregs of winter and spring is like an open door waiting I am no longer the wilted flower of winter but have spring cleaned my weather-stained soul my hair is a flowing river touched by a breeze and my view is a sea of blooms sun-kissed . . . ______________________________ April 2, 2020 (Edit, April 25, 2018) Poetry/Free Verse/I was so thirsty Copyright Protected, ID 20-1240-913-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to Strand Choice Y Contest sponsor, Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Date: 4/4/2020 11:36:00 PM
Just lovely Constance. You have so eloquently described our thirst for spring! Congratulations on your HM.
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Date: 4/5/2020 6:17:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the compliment on my poem, yes another HM, sigh ! _Constance
Date: 4/3/2020 9:10:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart … spring and colour are a wonderful blend for the promise of new life, natures music, and reason to nurture for autumns bounty - thank you for your inspirational verse Dear Heart - Lindsay
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Date: 4/4/2020 10:41:00 AM
Linday, thanks for visiting with that lovely comment _Constance
Date: 4/3/2020 1:43:00 PM
2020 spring will change our world has more creations have a better chance to survive without humans tromping on them or otherwise impacting the environment, so image what spring 2021 will be like! Aloha! Rico
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Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2020 10:42:00 AM
Rico, thanks for visiting, you make an excellent point _Constance
Date: 4/2/2020 8:17:00 PM
Wow Constance, I hope Brian loves this as much as I do! It made me smile and brought me cheer. Thank you for the colorful vision of spring that is beautifully written! xxoo
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Date: 4/4/2020 10:43:00 AM
Connie,thanks for the great comment, well Brian HM liked it _Constance

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