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I Want You

I see the look in your eyes... I want you. There is no way to disguise... I want you. I come near you... your body talks to mine. Loud and clear... never denies... I want you. I think of us together... skin on skin. We caress... releasing sighs... I want you. Passion fuels our need... for more... and yet more. We whisper in moans and cries... I want you. Baby, may our hearts consummate each day. To these words... our love relies... I want you. Written 3/22/2016 Ghazal Form Couplets - 5 Syllables - 10 each line Refrain - I want you Rhyming Words - eyes, disguise, denies, sighs, cries, relies

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 4/29/2018 1:42:00 AM

It s a really lovely and romantic poem, really enjoyed reading this one,

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 3:34:00 AM

Thank you Farez. Haven't been back here in a while. Appreciate your input and it's so sweet of you to go back. You have made my day!

James Inman

Date: 7/7/2017 10:00:00 AM

A passionate poem Susan. I'd love to see something new from you.

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:57:00 AM

Thank you! So nice of you to say so. I have added a few new ones. I have missed you all.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/25/2016 11:19:00 AM

Very nice ghazal Susan

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:55:00 AM

Thank you.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/4/2016 11:47:00 AM

lovely romantic write

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Jack.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/1/2016 1:54:00 PM

Hi Susan, Great Ghazal. Love.

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:53:00 AM

Thank you.

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/24/2016 8:18:00 AM

Oooooo...baby...time for a shower lol...^WW^

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:53:00 AM

Thanks.

Jean Murray

Date: 3/23/2016 6:52:00 PM

I want you to win. well done.

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:51:00 AM

Ahhh thanks.

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2016 4:57:00 PM

Susan, oh so sexy and hot, quite wonderful, and I am loving it 7 ~

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/23/2016 6:30:00 PM

Why thank you! Glad you like it and appreciate your 7! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2016 4:06:00 PM

Lovely and romantic, Susan. Good luck in that contest. It is sure an unusual form.

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/23/2016 6:29:00 PM

Yes it is and I like the form. Am thinking of another one, different topic. Thanks Andrea!

Anthony Mark

Date: 3/23/2016 12:19:00 PM

Very clever structure, the roll of the poem is effective , ( it's not a list) , which engages and involves the reader, ...obviously the theme is eye catching, but you made it sensuous not tacky...well done..

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/23/2016 6:27:00 PM

Thank you :) I like everything you said lol. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/22/2016 8:43:00 PM

Somebody open a window! Poem should've had a warning. LOL Super romantic write, Susan. This form suits you. Peace my pretty friend:)

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/23/2016 4:16:00 PM

Ahhh now now... lol! Thank you for comment. Thank you for being such a good friend. Happy Easter to you and yours, Danny :)