I Want To Give My All To You

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I want to give my heart to you, I want to give my heart to you, I want to give my heart to you forever more. I want to give my heart to you, I want to give my love to you, I want to give my life to you so we can soar. I want to give my soul to you, I want to do all things with you, I want life to unfold with you to see what’s in store. I pledge my love eternally, Twill always be just you and me, You’ll be a loving muse to me, as we open each new door. Destiny has set our course, No longer will there be remorse, We’re guided by creations source, from our very core. I want one last thing to do, I want to merge into one from two, To live in love’s oneness, the love of mythical lore.

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/20/2023 2:04:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hi. Please allow me to say simply that your entry is beautiful and wonderful in every way with all poetic elements attached including the emotive factor. Truly. May all know and feel your words and love itself. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. May today show all good things. Peace and Blessings to both you and Sara. Have a beautiful day. (smile)

Bill Baker
Date: 10/20/2023 5:45:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to go back and read some of the poems from last week. You are such a good friend and are so supportive. I hope everything there is going well for you and your mom, Lisa. Take care of yourself too. We need need here at Poetry Soup. Hugs, Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 10/16/2023 6:57:00 AM

This is so sweet and soul warming to read! Such a lyrical ode to your beautiful wife and soulmate! My favourite poetic couple you both are and to read the love you share for each other makes me smile! And my heart warm! So lovely! I guess it is rare to find love like yours! And if one does they should work on it, im sure you must have faced many challenges and you must have overcome them with your true love and bond you share with respect and faithfulness! Stay blessed always! A fave for me

Bill Baker
Date: 10/16/2023 9:59:00 PM

The Love is always with us, and challenges to face come on a regular basis, Ink. Thank you for the kind comments and the consistent support. It isn't easy when we both are trying to write, read, and comment on poetry at the same time. we're very human, we get off sometimes. I just thank God the Love is always there. Thank you for the FAV. :-) Blessings, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/15/2023 12:56:00 PM

oh dear hubby, what a surprise...a poem filled with your 'want to's'...so touching, romantic, and lovely. You touched my heart, my soulmate...you've done all those 'want to's'. I suppose when our earthy time together ends that we'll be 'one.' Makes me smile. Thank you for your from the bottom of my heart and soul...and the picture was fabulous...hugs, me

Bill Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 1:19:00 PM

You are my dream come true, Sara. I'll always Love you. Thanks for the loving comments, my soulmate. Big hugs, Bill

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 9:15:00 AM

Awww you old romantic you.. Sara will love your poem of devotion, dedication and infatuation... we all need a perfect partner and you have shown that in your words.. I wish everyone in the world could have a love like the two of yours..

Bill Baker
Date: 10/15/2023 10:31:00 AM

Think you, Silent One, for the kind things you say about Sara and me. I wish more people would realize they have the potential in their marriages to have the kind of love they see in our relationship. It takes work along with the openness to allow Love to flow through both individuals so they can become one in spirit. Blessings my friend, Bill