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I Wandered Lonely As a Twig

I wandered lonely as a twig that fell into an endless stream. I’d turn and sometimes make a zig or bob along in a bad dream. No longer on a branch was I to gaze steadfastly at blue sky. Instead this stream was moving me so rapidly – I knew not where. Oh, how I missed my tall oak tree and breath of autumn in the air when wind would blow my leaf so small which had turned scarlet in the fall. One day that tiny leaf was gone. Not long thereafter, I was too. Gone was the field I’d smiled upon. A course unknown I would pursue. How strange! Although I once knew rain, this too much water was my bane. No home had I, nor pretty views like once I had when I belonged to that great oak. I did not choose this fate so cruel. I felt so wronged till wood debris stopped water’s flow. Now friends are twigs I’ve come to know! Sept. 21, 2022 NA in the "I Wandered Lonely As...." Challenge" Contest, judged 10/22/22 For Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 12/17/2022 4:51:00 PM
Dear Andrea, your personification is enchanting and endearing. Your brilliant artistry shines, my friend. Warmest wishes for a happy and healthy Holiday season.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/9/2022 7:48:00 PM
This is breathtakingl and heartfelt poem my dear friend Andrea. I felt for the lonely twig but I love the ending. To my fav. Congratulations on your top win and this brilliant write! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 12/8/2022 9:06:00 AM
Clever analogy to what happens in real life. Congrats on your top placement in Constance’s X’d Contest. Luv, SuZ
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Date: 12/8/2022 4:57:00 AM
Andrea, so magical and delightful, although I felt sadness for the lost twig. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance, well done, blessings
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Date: 12/6/2022 8:03:00 AM
Great use of symbolism in this expressive, descriptive poem, Andrea. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 12/6/2022 4:52:00 AM
I agree. I like this poem a lot.
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Date: 12/5/2022 7:28:00 PM
This is simply brilliant, Andrea, congratulations:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/5/2022 10:14:00 PM
thanks so much. It was one of my personal favorites, so I am glad Constance made this contest so I could enter it.
Date: 9/30/2022 6:58:00 AM
Andrea, one of your best and obviously a FAV! One of the most beautiful poems I have ever read here at the Soup. You just shine in this creation. And it should have gotten a win! Gee! Pangie xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/30/2022 8:34:00 AM
thanks for saying that, Pangie. I even get an N/A from Brian too. That is why I just give him footles . I can't seem to give him a normal poem that he considers worthy of a win
Date: 9/24/2022 4:20:00 PM
A FAV for me, Andrea. I loved the flow (no pun intended). You painted a varied of scenes well and made good use of imagery as you shared this experience in life with us throught your metaphor, the twig. Thanks for sharing this touching poem. Bless you and your gift of poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2022 9:50:00 PM
thanks so much since it did not get a win. That makes me feel good.
Date: 9/23/2022 6:00:00 PM
This is beautiful, Andrea. I felt so sorry for the poor twig. GL in contest.
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Date: 9/23/2022 10:37:00 AM
This was so well written, bringing the analogy of a twig to one's life. Love it.
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Date: 9/22/2022 1:30:00 PM
I love your enjambment in the last verse. Well placed in this lovely verse.
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Date: 9/22/2022 12:09:00 PM
Enjoyed! I haven't seen Connie's Obit in the newspaper, but this will do! Aloha!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/22/2022 12:59:00 PM
thanks, Rico. I have a better poem for Connie to be posted soon. I am waiting for word from her daughter Jennifer if there was an obit or anything like that. Guess not!!
Date: 9/22/2022 8:50:00 AM
Lovely Poetry Andrea. Love your theme using a twig. A favorite for me. Hugs...
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Date: 9/22/2022 7:23:00 AM
..."Every twig has its day". Excellently done Andrea I sense this "twig" creeping back to the top soon.....
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Date: 9/22/2022 2:01:00 AM
I enjoyed this so much .Throughout it I drew comparison to life as we know it.Well done Andrea.
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Date: 9/22/2022 1:27:00 AM
Well composed.
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Date: 9/21/2022 11:58:00 PM
Nicely composed lament of a lonely twig, Andrea.
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Date: 9/21/2022 9:01:00 PM
This lament of the twig is heart rending."Although I once knew rain, this too much water was my bane." Being drifted away by the currents to an unknown destination is awful. Beautiful poem, Andrea. All the Best
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Date: 9/21/2022 7:52:00 PM
This such a fantastic piece ,, love it. Does the title have to be only 2 words?
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Date: 9/21/2022 7:25:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this masterpiece, Andrea. I believe I see a winner. Evelyn :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/25/2022 11:06:00 AM
Well, it's a great poem, even so, lol. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2022 9:51:00 PM
oopsie, you didn't. hahaha
Date: 9/21/2022 2:01:00 PM
Nice one!! :)
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