I Wandered Lonely As a Twig

I wandered lonely as a twig
that fell into an endless stream.
I’d turn and sometimes make a zig
or bob along in a bad dream.
No longer on a branch was I
to gaze steadfastly at blue sky.

Instead this stream was moving me
so rapidly – I knew not where.
Oh, how I missed my tall oak tree
and breath of autumn in the air
when wind would blow my leaf so small
which had turned scarlet in the fall.

One day that tiny leaf was gone.
Not long thereafter, I was too.
Gone was the field I’d smiled upon.
A course unknown I would pursue.
How strange! Although I once knew rain,
this too much water was my bane.

No home had I, nor pretty views
like once I had when I belonged
to that great oak. I did not choose
this fate so cruel. I felt so wronged
till wood debris stopped water’s flow.
Now friends are twigs I’ve come to know!

Sept. 21, 2022
NA in the "I Wandered Lonely As...." Challenge" Contest, judged 10/22/22
For Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
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Ashley Avatar
December 17, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Dear Andrea, your personification is enchanting and endearing. Your brilliant artistry shines, my friend. Warmest wishes for a happy and healthy Holiday season.. ~Susan
Gasun Avatar
December 9, 2022 at 7:48 PM
This is breathtakingl and heartfelt poem my dear friend Andrea. I felt for the lonely twig but I love the ending. To my fav. Congratulations on your top win and this brilliant write! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Delaney Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Clever analogy to what happens in real life. Congrats on your top placement in Constance’s X’d Contest. Luv, SuZ
La France Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 4:57 AM
Andrea, so magical and delightful, although I felt sadness for the lost twig. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance, well done, blessings
Canerdy Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 8:03 AM
Great use of symbolism in this expressive, descriptive poem, Andrea. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Pachecho Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 4:52 AM
I agree. I like this poem a lot.
Daniel Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 7:28 PM
This is simply brilliant, Andrea, congratulations:)
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 10:14 PM
thanks so much. It was one of my personal favorites, so I am glad Constance made this contest so I could enter it.
Romios Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 6:58 AM
Andrea, one of your best and obviously a FAV! One of the most beautiful poems I have ever read here at the Soup. You just shine in this creation. And it should have gotten a win! Gee! Pangie xx
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 8:34 AM
thanks for saying that, Pangie. I even get an N/A from Brian too. That is why I just give him footles . I can't seem to give him a normal poem that he considers worthy of a win
Baker Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 4:20 PM
A FAV for me, Andrea. I loved the flow (no pun intended). You painted a varied of scenes well and made good use of imagery as you shared this experience in life with us throught your metaphor, the twig. Thanks for sharing this touching poem. Bless you and your gift of poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:50 PM
thanks so much since it did not get a win. That makes me feel good.
Peck Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 6:00 PM
This is beautiful, Andrea. I felt so sorry for the poor twig. GL in contest.
Walker Avatar
September 23, 2022 at 10:37 AM
This was so well written, bringing the analogy of a twig to one's life. Love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 1:30 PM
I love your enjambment in the last verse. Well placed in this lovely verse.
Leffanta Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Enjoyed! I haven't seen Connie's Obit in the newspaper, but this will do! Aloha!
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 12:59 PM
thanks, Rico. I have a better poem for Connie to be posted soon. I am waiting for word from her daughter Jennifer if there was an obit or anything like that. Guess not!!
Tor Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Lovely Poetry Andrea. Love your theme using a twig. A favorite for me. Hugs...
Lawless Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 7:23 AM
..."Every twig has its day". Excellently done Andrea I sense this "twig" creeping back to the top soon.....
Rhymer Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 2:01 AM
I enjoyed this so much .Throughout it I drew comparison to life as we know it.Well done Andrea.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 1:27 AM
Well composed.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 11:58 PM
Nicely composed lament of a lonely twig, Andrea.
George Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:01 PM
This lament of the twig is heart rending."Although I once knew rain, this too much water was my bane." Being drifted away by the currents to an unknown destination is awful. Beautiful poem, Andrea. All the Best
Roper Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:52 PM
This such a fantastic piece ,, love it. Does the title have to be only 2 words?
Buehler Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:25 PM
I enjoyed reading this masterpiece, Andrea. I believe I see a winner. Evelyn :)
Buehler Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 11:06 AM
Well, it's a great poem, even so, lol. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 9:51 PM
oopsie, you didn't. hahaha
Woodrow Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Nice one!! :)
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