I Wandered Lonely As a Leaf That Falls

Inspired by "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud," by William Wordsworth

I wandered lonely as a leaf that falls,
unmourned, to the distant ground
I paused when I heard a far bird's calls
Magic I'd missed looking down--
royal Autumn leaves danced in gold and red.
This must be where my lonely heart has led.

Opened my eyes to this spellbound place,
and breathed air perfumed by pine.
Then sat near blossom with smiling face,
feeling thoughts and heart align.
I watched grass spinning beneath a tall oak;
heard whispered promises breeze softly spoke.

Head full of dreams, I wandered along
paths worn by many steps before.
Mountain larks welcomed me with a song,
I spied lilacs, bluebells, and more.
Around each corner, surprises await.
I feel my loneliness start to abate.

I happen upon a wayward creek,
sit and watch her bouncing spray,
Bubbling with laughter, just what I seek--
hidden by an oak overlay.
Untethered nature met unquiet heart.
Now I burst with song; can't tell us apart!

September 18,2022
for "I Wandered Lonely As A..." contest
by Natasha L. Scragg
Third Place
Poem of the Week

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Date: 11/8/2022 6:00:00 AM
I am late getting to this lovely poem. Belated congratulations on your POTW ! Just beautiful Anne with its descriptions and your heart felt words. I love the unraveling and the journey leading to the creek . Your final line is perfect ! I feel your thoughts . Susan :)
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:58:00 PM
The creek, bubbling, and the oak! Wonderful picture, Ann! Elizabeth
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Date: 11/5/2022 9:02:00 AM
This is beautiful, Ann, and the imagery appeals to all our senses. Belated congrats on your podium finish and p.o.t.w. award. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/31/2022 2:21:00 AM
Were you once Wordsworth?
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Ann Peck
Date: 12/29/2022 9:35:00 AM
How kind of you to say that :)
Date: 10/2/2022 3:17:00 AM
Sandra, well penned with a nice message, congratulations on POTW!
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Date: 10/2/2022 1:11:00 AM
A very inspirational verse Sandy, congratulations on the honour of POTW. Hope you're well. Tom
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Date: 10/1/2022 2:50:00 PM
Ann, such a wonderful walk in the woods with you, allowing nature to reset the lonesome soul. "feeling thoughts and heart align", "Untethered nature met unquiet heart" are such lovely lines. "Magic I'd missed looking down--" reminds me of the many times i have been hiking with my eyes so fixed to the trail that I miss the glories of creation all around me. Congrats on your POTW acknowledgement ~ John
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Date: 9/26/2022 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your P.O.T.W., Ann. I enjoyed it immensely!
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Date: 9/26/2022 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! Impressive, creative and beautifully penned. :)Paulette
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Date: 9/26/2022 6:54:00 AM
Wow what an amazing poem Ann! Your imagery took me right there to the paths of this beautiful, peaceful place. Wonderfully written and a well deserved POTW. This one is going to my faves. Cheers my friend :-)
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Date: 9/26/2022 1:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW. Well done.
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Date: 9/25/2022 11:41:00 PM
An amazing write Ann, I like the last two lines best ~ congrats on POTW!
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Date: 9/25/2022 5:07:00 PM
Comforting lyrics and inspiration to be one with nature in this eloquently written poetry, Ann. Congratulations on your POTW, my friend. Enjoy your special award. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, Bill. I really appreciate them. Smiles and blessings to you, too.
Date: 9/25/2022 1:35:00 PM
Watching leaves bounce along the stream, while bubbling with laughter, certainly takes the sadness away. The loneliness. (It does for me anyway). This is beautiful in so many wonderful ways. Your thoughts can lighten any mood, and bring a smile to the heart. Congratulations Ann, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 5:30:00 PM
Dear Brandy, Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. I don't get to the mountains often enough (I live in the desert southwest), but we can always dream! Hugs back to you.
Date: 9/25/2022 6:00:00 AM
Ann, such a beautiful poem congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor, and on your contest win, Constance
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 5:22:00 PM
Dear Constance, thank you for your kind congratulations. To tell the truth, I'm overwhelmed by the POTW.
Date: 9/25/2022 5:09:00 AM
Ann, a wonderfully penned poem, congratulations on POTW!
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 5:31:00 PM
Dear Tania, Thank you so much for your kind comments!
Date: 9/25/2022 1:11:00 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Ann, congratulations on the honour of POTW. Tom
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. My computer was hacked and I can't even get on Email to thank Soup for the honor.
Date: 9/24/2022 9:52:00 PM
I knew this one would win. So deserved. congrats, Ann
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 5:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I'm totally overwhelmed by the honor.
Date: 9/24/2022 3:40:00 AM
I love the peace and calm feel to this poem Ann. A lovely entry indeed. Thank you for joining the contest and congrats on your placement:-D
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much for this high placement!!
Date: 9/22/2022 10:31:00 AM
Everyone feeling better now. Thoughtful Anne.......thx, suzanne
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/25/2022 5:38:00 PM
Thanks, dear Suzanne. I'm stunned by the honor.
Date: 9/21/2022 7:14:00 PM
I thought the falling leaf will be sad. Instead she is all happy with new friends in new surroundings. Beautifully penned Ann
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Date: 9/21/2022 7:08:00 PM
very lovely, Ann, and I think you concluded it excellently.
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Date: 9/20/2022 6:39:00 AM
Wonderful write Ann, GL in the Contest
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/20/2022 8:09:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 9/19/2022 3:59:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Ann, every line… Belle
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/20/2022 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Belle.
Date: 9/19/2022 12:36:00 PM
Hello Ann Peck, I love this poem.Will be my fav. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2022 5:02:00 AM
Hello Ann, Yes i do love your poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Ann Peck
Date: 9/19/2022 6:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene, and for the fav, too! I love that you love my poem. :)
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