I Wait For the Sun

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I wait for the sun to rise each new day I need it for my seedlings they stretch their leaves up the sun is their warm embrace and my kitty loves to lay on the sill she makes herself as long as she can be and I love to sit at my desk with a coffee mug while I am bathed in sunlight that flows inside my home and it is magical to watch the clouds swirling, twirling endlessly but also it is lovely to see the sun going down in evening tide at the end because I know without fail it will return to me and shine on my tomorrow __________________________ March 21, 2020 Added after Judging April 1/20: Poetry/Free Verse/I wait For The Sun Copyright Protected, ID 20-1238-080-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, GIF 2, Your Best sponsor, William Kekaula Sample #2 Chosen as theme

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John Watt

Date: 4/1/2020 5:07:00 PM

"because I know without fail" is such a timely message of hope. The sun is an icon of continuity and we need those icons right now to help us through our unsettling days. Bless you, Constance for spreading the hope vibe and being another icon of constancy, the meaning of your name. Congrats on your #1! Hugs ~ John

Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2020 5:44:00 PM

John, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations and hugs _Constance

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/1/2020 4:33:00 PM

This is a beautiful write, Constance. Love the Etheree-like layout as well!. Congratulations on your first place win!

Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2020 5:44:00 PM

Edward, thank you for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance

Hilo Poet

Date: 4/1/2020 4:06:00 PM

A wondrous outlook, Constance, in momentary lapses of anticipation, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William

Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2020 5:45:00 PM

William thank you for another inspiring contest and for my placement _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2020 8:01:00 AM

Your poem is full of optimism, and hope. It makes me feel joyful that things will be okay.

Constance La France
Date: 3/22/2020 10:03:00 AM

Caren, thanks for visiting and your lovely comment, appreciate _Constance