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2/10/23

Placed 1st in the UP to you Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Brian Strand

I, the wind, speak to you now I move with strength, teach you how To trust, when the bough breaks To blow away the heartaches I, the wind, move many things With my speed, change brings A bluster of cold in the sun Clouds racing, where there were none I, the wind, will caress your mind Listen to me, for peace you may find

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Barbara Peckham

Date: 4/2/2023 4:58:00 PM

Well done. I particularly like first person and personification poems. This is one of the best.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/3/2023 6:06:00 AM

Thank you very much Barbara :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/19/2023 11:22:00 PM

great to read your personification poem

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2023 4:09:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/19/2023 9:11:00 PM

This is lovely Heidi, a perfect Personification poem. A fave - Belle

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/20/2023 4:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Belle. I appreciate the Fave. :)

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/12/2023 11:59:00 AM

Excellent personification. I agree that the wind does bring change.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2023 2:42:00 PM

Thank you very much. I appreciate your comments :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/11/2023 8:07:00 PM

"teach you how To trust, when the bough breaks To blow away the heartaches" - Indeed, great teaching by the wind. Congratulations!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2023 3:39:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/11/2023 7:50:00 PM

Wonderful characterization of the wind, Heidi. May it always be with you! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2023 8:02:00 PM

Thank you , my friend :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/11/2023 4:47:00 PM

Spellbinding write and a very deserving 1st place winner, Heidi:-) Hurray!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2023 5:04:00 PM

Thank you very much Edward :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/11/2023 4:20:00 PM

A beautiful articulation you've crafted, Heidi, a natural portrait, with my compliments and Aloha, William

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2023 4:28:00 PM

Tha k you very much William :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/11/2023 7:59:00 AM

Nicely done Heidi. The wind is everywhere in everything we do. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2023 10:37:00 AM

Thank you Linda :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/11/2023 12:15:00 AM

I can feel it, Heidi, simple and powerful:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2023 10:37:00 AM

Thank you Jo :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/10/2023 1:12:00 PM

Refreshing like the wind. Well done, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 1:18:00 PM

Tha k you very much Vijay. I appreciate your kindness always :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/10/2023 11:11:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I enjoy the sound of the wind blowing. i find it a peaceful sound. it relaxes me. My fav. hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/11/2023 6:14:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I love to do nature poems.In my imagination i picture a cloud with curly edges with angry eyes blowing chilled or warm air, Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 11:22:00 AM

Thank you Darlene. I appreciate the fav . Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2023 11:03:00 AM

- The wind can show itself from different emotions... from the soft summer wind to the powerful winter storm...just like us humans ... a lovely poem, Heidi :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 11:21:00 AM

True. It is just like that. Thank you. Hugs :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/10/2023 10:29:00 AM

Heidi, what a breath of freshness in your poem. I so enjoyed the many faces of the wind! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings and continued prayers.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 10:38:00 AM

Thank you very much Sam :)

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/10/2023 9:59:00 AM

Amen, the wind of the spirit comes in and creates new life : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 10:28:00 AM

Yes. Thank you Stephan :)