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I Step Into the Dark

I step into the dark with fear and doubt, the path I take- a foreign, dismal place; no map to guide my way through twists and turns, but I will place my steps within the dark. I ask, my God. Why is my path so dark? And why must I embark alone in fear? And why is each step that I take a test? In this great void of darkness- deep, unknown. But I have strength and I will venture on- The past is gone, it dwells in mind and heart; I have my soul to guide my path today, and put my trust in me- to guide my way. ______________________________________________ November 13, 2016 Poetry/Blank Verse/I Step Into The Dark Copyright Protected, ID 849-662-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Shooting Black Verse Sponsor, John Lawless Fifth Place

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Date: 12/11/2016 7:51:00 PM
A very deep and well-written Blank Verse poem, Constance. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/10/2016 10:29:00 PM
A 7 for your moving, WINNING poem, Constance! Janice
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:04:00 PM
Wonderful metaphor for life, Constance. Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/10/2016 2:06:00 PM
That action of stepping into the dark, and thinking about it - such a human thing. : )
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Date: 12/10/2016 1:03:00 PM
Just the first step... That is so well described but so hard to do... Congratulations!
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Date: 11/16/2016 8:01:00 AM
A Beautiful write BW. Love the positive last stanza.
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Date: 11/13/2016 5:38:00 PM
Hello there my dear poetic friend... This write may be dark, but there had to be some light for you to see this slip to spill your poetic thoughts! Great write yet again...! much love, james
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Date: 11/13/2016 3:08:00 PM
Excellent! I am saving this in my favorites! 7+!
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Date: 11/13/2016 1:46:00 PM
Great poem Constance. I fear that first step as well.
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