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I am the dependable North Star, the diamond in the twilight sky, guiding you as you journey to your destination; lighting the pathway when dawn is swallowed by the umbra of night. I'm Sirius, a beautiful bright star. In search of your dreams, you reach to the heavens for me to make them come true. In search of wonder, you look up to me to write it in bold letters across the firmament. I am the Sun, the granddaddy of all the stars. The mega-watt bulb of Planet Earth. You feel me on your skin and spirit every single day. I bestow refreshing warmth when the world grows too cold to bear. I'm the symbol of hope and happiness. I'm Venus, a morning star forever welcoming you into a promising dawn You've got a wish? Wish away! I'll happily grant them! Date written: 07/04/2020

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Date: 8/14/2020 8:57:00 PM
I loved this Edward and the way to highlighted each star including the sun! Beautiful imagery and attributions to each star giving them a personality! Congratulations - a fav for me! All the best!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/14/2020 9:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congrats and fav, Sam:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 8/14/2020 8:21:00 PM
Enjoyed the read of your personified stars, Edward. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 8/14/2020 9:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, John:-) Blessings to you!
Date: 8/14/2020 10:59:00 AM
Nice write Edward no N/A this time, congrats on a nice placement, thanks for your entry!
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Date: 8/14/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for my wonderful placement, John:-) Most obliged.
Date: 7/4/2020 10:28:00 PM
With this write, you are truly a pantheon of stars, Edward. Nicely done. ~ Gershon
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/5/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 7/4/2020 10:27:00 PM
This poem is delightful in many ways. Good luck in the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/5/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, Caren:-)

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