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I Shoulda Seen It Comin

I shoulda seen it coming, but blind I was with love Had I been cautious, I could have given it a shove * * * * * Once there was vernal sunshine all around With plants and blooms in color and scent abound Butterflies from here and there and all corners unseen Flitted back and forth before my eyes in colorful sheen Birds sang tuneful songs of contentment Squirrels and bunnies hopped in spirits buoyant But all along now I see trees, leafless and bare Nakedly shivering in winter’s chilly air Even when the Earth adorns in full glory Here I bide alone, so dull and dreary Oh! Dear! Why did you so callously leave me? After making me slosh in the sea of delight in rising glee? Once, we walked the meadows, gathering spring flowers There was a time we roamed aimless through ocean strands Mischievously watching life’s ceaseless ebb and flow And waiting eager to grab life’s evanescent glow Once we danced to the rising and lilting measure Each synchronized step, we took with such pleasure Oh! I hear from far, your anklets rhyme and chime They ring in my ears creating waves of pain all through time I had dreamt that our love would one day reach fruition And never will our rock of friendship suffer any erosion But as you slowly started growing more and more silent I should have seen it as your indifference made blatant Instead, I thought you were annoyed for some other reason And for long continued to pour on you my boundless passion Had I seen earlier the cold creeping into our romantic friendship I wouldn’t been so hurt and all at once could cut our relationship Feb.1.2023 I Shoulda Seen it Comin’ Poetry Contest Sponsor- John Lawless

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Date: 2/8/2023 4:25:00 PM
Sad and heartfelt poetry, Valsa. We get caught up in our viewpoint and sometimes miss reality all together. I'm sure many here will identify with your experience, as I certainly do. You share so much love and beauty through your poetry, we are blessed. Thank you, Bill
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Date: 2/2/2023 6:32:00 PM
Such a heartfelt, heart-breaking write, Valsa. So well written, as usual. Masterful and genuine, my dear friend. Best wishes in the contest. Also, thank you for your lovely comments on my POTD. Blessings.. Charlie
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Date: 2/2/2023 9:44:00 AM
Valsa this--simply put--is a masterpiece, so vividly descriptive of eyes that do not wish to see. Been there, done that! Great metaphors! Janice
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Date: 2/2/2023 5:44:00 AM
"Once, we walked the meadows, gathering spring flowers There was a time we roamed aimless through ocean strands"~ outstanding expression! Good luck with contest.
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Date: 2/1/2023 11:43:00 PM
The unexpected, dances like a temptress, luring one into it's lair, imbedded with gilded ethereal sculptures and diamond studded walls, only to then take the same blinded spirit into a darkened room filled with gloom. A fine write filled with a variety of emotions! Cheers, Valsa!...ab
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Date: 2/1/2023 1:27:00 PM
When love goes wrong, we can indeed become world weary even depressed, and fail to see the beauty and exuberance we once observed all around us, strange though how many end up in the same situation time after time, fantastic intro and even better poem, cheers David
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Date: 2/1/2023 1:17:00 PM
Love is blind sometimes, which you so brilliantly describe, Valsa. Ebullience and despondency are two of the sensations that pervade this work all throughout the whole. Excellent work, just as usual. I wish you the best in the contest.
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Date: 2/1/2023 11:41:00 AM
Excellent take on the theme, Valsa. You are so good!!
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Date: 2/1/2023 7:39:00 AM
Love hurts sometimes, as you so well convey, Valsa. Emotions exude throughout-- of exuberance and sadly despair. Well done as always. Best to you.
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Date: 2/1/2023 5:18:00 AM
Sometimes we fail to see what's going on and are often blind to it. Its a painful experience Valsa. Tom
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Date: 2/1/2023 5:17:00 AM
The beauty of the spirit of God entering so full of life , joy.peace .Then this world tries to destroy it , my friend sings a song the one love that keeps me alive,. Seems so many fall back into the world with all the chaos and deception around us, but the ones which comes back to that spirit have learned this is where I want to stay , in the will of God : ). This love within us is the most beautiful and pleasing, full of love, joy ,peace and completeness: ) this comment is for all to find love
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Date: 2/1/2023 4:15:00 AM
Sometimes in relationships by being with that person so much we don't see the changes, but others on the outside looking in can see them. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with a nice review of my work. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2023 3:52:00 AM
Dear Valsa, a sad poem but what a great verse. The contrast between being in love and losing it is stark. So much imagery and emotions in your poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/1/2023 2:53:00 AM
Descriptive and painful, Valsa, you write beautifully:)
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