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I See Beyond the Present

I see a world flowing with passion full of happiness and beautiful fashion, where men intermingled with love with full support from heaven above, oppression and wickedness are no more, as the sun shines like metallic ore, The rivers flow like crystals of ice, which makes the atmosphere cool and nice, A world clean and free from pollutions with educative and innovative notions, where people can walk freely at nights without fear of molestation of their rights, Violence and natural disasters are obscured, diseases and emotional stress are cured, There will I love to dwell, Though I did not sleep well.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/27/2011 8:22:00 PM
Paradise I hope we can all see one day!! That was a funny last line, Olusequn!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:54:00 PM
Very nicely done, congratulations on your win, Greg.
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Date: 12/27/2011 2:21:00 PM
Someday this earth will be that great place but until then we have to live with the bad as well as the good..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 12/27/2011 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations, liked it first time x
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Date: 12/27/2011 6:06:00 AM
Hi O, I love this paradise you poetically created and would like 2 first class tickets there asap. Congrats on this very well scripted write! Happy Holidays too! All the best to you, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/26/2011 10:33:00 PM
Oh but if only it were true. Congratulations on your win with this thoughtful entry Olusegun
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Date: 12/26/2011 4:52:00 PM
A beautiful picture of life that you see beyond. Wonderful sight. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/26/2011 4:19:00 PM
Oluesgun congrats on your win..David
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Date: 12/22/2011 3:40:00 AM
A lovely passage, was it taken fro the scriptures if so you have done a lovely job with them . If not its a lovely write and dream of all of us x
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