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I cradled his head in my arms and sang him a lullaby, cradling the m o m e n t, cherishing every second more, then, when it was time . . . I placed him in his f o r e v e r coffin bed. An odd bed for a little baby boy, his little head lay on a b l u e as the sky pillow, he wore his new blue booties, an ivory christening gown, and beside him a b l u e teddy bear, someone had placed there. As I stood in the funeral home, I felt so a l o n e and hallow, although many people surrounded me, I was l o s t in thoughts . . . thinking of that empty baby room at home, there would be no babyhood, where, I would pamper, coddle and feed him, no childhood fun, no youth or adulthood, no ripe old a g e for this boy. No days or years to cherish him, no beginning, just this sad end, so, on the day of his funeral . . . I sang him a l u l l a b y to last forever, and I handed him over to the Lord, I whispered, Lord, cradle my boy in your arms, until in your time, I can once more. The cars followed the hearse in a long line, through the ornate cemetery gate, and down the w i n d i n g roads with BENDING trees, even the birds in the cemetery, stopped their s o n g . . . until at last, we reached the place of tears, standing there cradled by family l o v e , all that could be heard, drifting, was the lullaby, I sang . . . _____________________ June 29, 2016 Free Verse(lost love) Submitted to the contest, Your Best Free Verse Love Poem, sponsor, John Hamilton Seventh Place _______________________ Submitted to the contest, Free Verse About Love, sponsor, Laura Loo First Place _______________________ Submitted to the contest, Free Verse, sponsor, ? NA

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Date: 1/21/2017 4:43:00 AM
I could not retain my tears reading this so exquisitely composed poem. Congrats BK.
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Date: 1/20/2017 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win with this heart wrenching, poignant poem.
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Date: 1/20/2017 9:57:00 PM
A heart touching poem, BW, a 7 from me:) congratulations on your well deserved trophy win:)
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Date: 1/20/2017 6:58:00 PM
A heartbreaking poem Broken Wings... congrats on first place and sorry for your loss :'( **Hugs**
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Date: 1/20/2017 6:46:00 PM
It is the most heart wrenching lullaby of all. Such beautiful introspection of the moment suffered in time. A well deserved win.
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Date: 1/20/2017 5:42:00 PM
I can't begin to imagine the pain of losing a child Constance - i type with tears in my eyes... congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2017 1:49:00 PM
SUPERBLY done Wings...the greatest sad a mother can bear...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 1/20/2017 12:10:00 PM
oh my sweet Broken Wings- you always tug at my heart strings...you make the beauty of your soul sing and such tender moments to my heart you bring...(a song to you ) congrats and thank you :)-luloo
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Date: 11/5/2016 4:31:00 PM
I cannot recall the contest this was written for but hard to grasp it did not place. What kind of heartless person would not place this emotional write based on a true event in my life.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2017 5:57:00 PM
Thank you Laura for hosting an HM contest and giving my poem an incredible win of First Place, so proud today
Date: 7/4/2016 10:21:00 PM
So profound, Broken Wing, your work is so amazing a 100% and tears. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for reading my poem, “Mystery and Seclusion” Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/4/2016 12:46:00 PM
Beautiful. The lullaby is still being sung! Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 7/2/2016 2:47:00 PM
there is nothing that could ever be said to comfort a pain that will never leave, that journey is always traveled alone...good luck a heart wrenching poem that should do well
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Date: 7/1/2016 1:38:00 PM
Emotive and expressive work..Reads like a winner to me..I hope not a personal experience but if so I know that it was a terrible time for you and your family..Years help with the pain but one always wonders what my child would have been..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 7/1/2016 9:18:00 AM
Very moving, hearing you read it added another dimension to the piece.
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Date: 7/1/2016 4:18:00 AM
This is sad and touches my heart. I always feel for those little ones who go away a little too soon...a soul stirring write, Constance:)
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Date: 6/29/2016 8:34:00 PM
It is raining torrents in my heart! Memory!
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Date: 6/29/2016 2:04:00 PM
Broken Wings....There is so much pain in this poem......I don't know what to say... I can only pray for your happiness ....take care.
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Date: 6/29/2016 12:17:00 PM
Broken Wings.....what a poem. It grips the heart. One cannot even imagine such pain...It was good to hear your voice. As you said in your poem...there is a better day coming. hugs
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