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I Remember You

Even though the wounds are healing my heart still remembers you In my deepest dream I reach out to touch only emptiness Your mirrored reflection of a face I once knew is now lost to me It is fragmented and strewn across my memory as if it were and old puzzle found with so many pieces missing My dreams betray me as even they will no longer allow me to see you or to touch you again Distant images now stolen from me forever haunting me still Look upon me once more quiet this darkness you have left me to I still remember you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/6/2010 9:25:00 PM
LOVE THIS. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:03:00 PM
Congrats Shar on your super win in John's contest with this brilliant write and entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv...
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Shar. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Jared, Sharon
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Date: 12/3/2010 7:37:00 AM
thankxx for your warm and welcome comments on my poetry Sharon along with your well wishes for contest entries.. I send the same to u my friend along with a happy weekend too..with luv..
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Date: 11/30/2010 2:20:00 PM
Emotion filled writing Sharon >> James :)
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:02:00 PM
This is a very interesting poem. It has a haunting touch to it. Your last line is so very final. Good work here. Thanks for your comment on my work. Take care, Jancarl
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:24:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Shar. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:47:00 PM
Wonderful ..full of emotion Sharon and good luck in John's contest.. but.. please removed the footnote as John has requested in his 'rules' not to put his name or contest on the entry luv.. so u won't be disqualified.. John is very definite on his 'rules'...good luck with this tear jerker full of emotion...
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:12:00 PM
Love the Poem Sharon... sent chills through me! Thanks for sharing and good luck! Lay
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:02:00 PM
Wonderful flowing write on the jaded love, Good luck in the contest, Sharon
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:41:00 PM
when love's door closes, a window opens, sharon... bequiling piece punctuated with word usage sentimental and nostalgic.. great job! hoping for the best in john's contest, if this is an entry! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:06:00 PM
The memories and their haunting effect linger long after a love has gone awry, Sharon. A very touching poem to which many will relate. If this is for John Heck's contest, I wish you success. It should do very well! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:03:00 PM
Good work..Sara
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