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I recall that box of heart-shaped diet candy~~ and saying "Good-bye." Date: February 4, 2021 Contest: Valentine Senryu Placed 2nd Sponsor: Tania Kitchin October 5, 2022 entered in John Lawless's Simply Senryu Poetry Contest Placed 10th

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Date: 10/15/2022 9:42:00 AM
funny one! Congrats on the win
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Date: 2/26/2021 11:48:00 AM
Well penned I hope the candy was good. Comments show that the poem was placed. So congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/15/2021 5:24:00 PM
Ha, ha! Such a thoughtful gift, that! lol. A gift that really showed great reflection and sensitivity. LOL again. Ha, ha! Perfect penning, Janice. Love it. :) gw
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Date: 2/12/2021 5:00:00 PM
OUCH you made me smile Janice, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2021 8:25:00 PM
Janice , congratulations on your win. Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. Janice
Date: 2/11/2021 5:01:00 PM
hahaha, Most of it is NOT that great tasting. Congrats on the win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Janice
Date: 2/11/2021 12:48:00 AM
Not the sort of message anyone wants to hear lol. Congrats on your win Janice. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 11:00:00 AM
Hi Janice, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 8:00:00 AM
- Congratulations so much on your winning poem, Janice ... really rude :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 7:20:00 AM
Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny poem!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:53:00 AM
Tania, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 6:16:00 AM
oooh. Congratulations on the win Janice! Linda
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:56:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda! Janice
Date: 2/6/2021 10:02:00 PM
Excellent senryu. For such a sweet moment.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/7/2021 6:28:00 AM
Thanks so much, Harry! Janice
Date: 2/5/2021 11:08:00 AM
I enjoyed your treat - and the comments! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/7/2021 6:28:00 AM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Date: 2/5/2021 9:50:00 AM
I echo Akkina words, at least I got the candy. But then why did he give me diet candy, hmm? Janice, he wasn't your type, that is why you cannot remember his name! A great write in preparation for Valentine Day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/7/2021 6:31:00 AM
Jennifer, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 2/5/2021 8:13:00 AM
The dude’s name is “dead” LOL
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/7/2021 6:32:00 AM
YES! Thanks a million, Kim! Janice
Date: 2/4/2021 8:53:00 PM
LOL! I guess if he didn't give much impression. But the candy did. Hilariously good. I smiled a huge one : ) best wishes in the contest.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/5/2021 5:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Akkina. Janice
Date: 2/4/2021 6:56:00 PM
Lol! Janice, This is hilarious. I laughed out loud reading it. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/5/2021 5:19:00 AM
Thanks so much, Alexis. Janice
Date: 2/4/2021 3:49:00 PM
Diet candy? It probably didn't taste good! However, your writing was good.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/4/2021 6:43:00 PM
Thanks, Robert.

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