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In the quiet of each day and night I miss you, oh, I miss you in all the places of my heart; yet, I find you in nature and in skies of blue, from what's left of my soul- you will never depart. Oh, I miss you in all the places of my heart, I miss your voice, smell, hugs, kisses, eyes, everything; from what's left of my soul you will never depart, and to the great memories we made- I will cling. I miss your voice, smell, hugs, kisses, eyes- everything, oh, I miss your smile, laugh, jokes and ever teasing; and to the great memories we made, I will cling, sometimes, I wonder will this sad grief be easing. Oh, I miss your smile, laugh, jokes and ever teasing, I whisper to you, miss you, need you, love always; sometimes, I wonder will this sad grief be easing, I visit your cold engraved name and with tears gaze. I whisper to you, miss you, need you, love always, yet, I find you in nature and in skies of blue; I visit your cold engraved name and with tears gaze, In the quiet of each day and night- I miss you. ____________________________ February 9, 2020 Poetry/Pantoum/I Miss You Copyright Protected, ID 20-1224-329-03 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pantoum Poetry sponsor, Line Gauthier Second Place

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Date: 6/17/2021 4:13:00 AM
This is a beautiful Pantoum you have written my friend... I donno why, I love writing Pantoums.. Have a blessed lovely day dear... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2021 6:51:00 AM
Ani, thank you for visiting my poem, I like Pantoums too and their repeating lines, the trick is to make them flow, sometimes that is quite the challenge, love _Constance
Date: 2/29/2020 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations Constance on your win! Such a complete poetic statement of all aspects of grief. Very nicely done!
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Date: 2/29/2020 7:51:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/9/2020 3:12:00 PM
Wonderful poem!
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Date: 2/10/2020 10:25:00 AM
Abdullah, thanks for visiting and for the wonderful _Constance
Date: 2/9/2020 1:25:00 PM
oh, I see you are still working on it. That's good. I am choosing this same theme. It felt the best to me. soupmail for you.
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Date: 2/9/2020 2:10:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting, yes, it took me a few hours to write it,hope I got it right, will go look at your soupie now _Constance

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