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falling blindly in Love.. the most logical                                                                and the most illogical...emotion..                                                        place does not matter, age does not matter,                                                 status does not matter, appearance does not matter.                                       What matters ~ looking in beloved's eyes, and being able to say... .                         You are the one who brings this fascinating world to me,  saved in your heart ~like a pearl encased in a shell of love. I see this world ...with your eyes! The incessant rain on a valley ~ the blessing of a sun-kissed day ~ the snow-capped mountain-peaks ~ the glorious sandy beach ~ the glow of a gorgeous morning ~ embrace all!  enjoy the rugged mountains ~ the steep hills, the formidable sand-dunes ~ wild dances of waves in the oceans ~ everything...and love You with my soul!  October 19, 2021 For "I Love You" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper For " Strand (DEC 26)" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 12/28/2021 7:05:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. A lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day and New Year 2022.............................
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Date: 12/27/2021 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Malabika. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 11/12/2021 11:25:00 PM
Oozing love! So happy to come across this exquisite write
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Date: 11/2/2021 1:37:00 PM
Mala - #5 on Best New Poems! Congratulations for this honor. Seeing love through the eyes of your loved one. How beautiful. Sending you blessings, hugs and much love!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/2/2021 2:45:00 PM
Dear Sam, you are so kind! I really wish I could write like you. Your style, your vocabulary, your images, are amazing!
Date: 10/30/2021 3:03:00 AM
The quote,"The lovers mustn't only love each other, but must love every scene seen together" comes to my mind to define perfect love exactly!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/2/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Dear Poet. Really appreciate your thoughtful words.
Date: 10/27/2021 1:18:00 PM
Mala, what beautiful imagery that expresses the essence of Love! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/28/2021 3:33:00 PM
Thanks, Paulette. Really appreciate your lovely comment.
Date: 10/25/2021 10:05:00 AM
So romantically lovely with the gentleness of committed love Mala. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/26/2021 4:22:00 PM
Thanks, Sam. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 10/25/2021 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations! High praise. Poetic to the max, Malabika. Would love to hear this from my partner spouse husband; but it just ain't gonna happen. I love him and he loves me anyway for real.
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Date: 10/25/2021 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Poet. Your appreciation inspired me.
Date: 10/25/2021 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations! High praise. Poetic to the max, Malabika. Would love to hear this from my partner spouse husband; but it just ain't gonna happen. I love him and he loves me anyway for real.
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:07:00 AM
This is great writing expressing in free verse the truth and beauty of love. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/28/2021 3:34:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 10/24/2021 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Malabika. Thank you for entering it in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/24/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. I feel honoured.
Date: 10/23/2021 2:48:00 PM
A lovely story/write and picture. There many kinds of love. You have them all here. Have a blessed autumn day writing away...................
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Date: 10/21/2021 3:44:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of nature's beauty seen through the awestruck eyes of one deeply in love. Everything becomes more beautiful and wondrous when we are in love - you have captured this so well, Mala. Going in my faves, so happy I read this today! Warm wishes ~ John
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/21/2021 4:38:00 PM
Oh John, I am speechless. My Dear Friend, I am so honoured you read my poem, and you liked it enough to send it to your faves. Thank you from the depth of my heart - your comments inspired me to continue writing poetry. Best wishes, always ~ Mala
Date: 10/21/2021 10:44:00 AM
You take your reader to a so sweet serene state of love! So beautiful what you have crafted with your poetic soul! If only we are constantly in a state of love! The heart will savour the riches of life and drinks to the fullest of the well of wonders! A great pleasure to read you, Malabika.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 10/21/2021 11:44:00 AM
Thanks, Besma. Really appreciate inspiring words from a talented poet like you.
Date: 10/20/2021 4:48:00 PM
so wonderful. I wish I were able to do one this great but I'm an old married woman and my love can't live up to this super sweet version!!
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Date: 10/20/2021 5:18:00 PM
OMG! You can do much better than me, Andrea! You are the best! What do you think of me!!!! Ha ha ha ! I was wondering if I can pull off a poem for this contest at all!
Date: 10/19/2021 3:43:00 PM
Lovely verse and vision. Lovely. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/19/2021 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina. Truly appreciate your lovely comment, Dear Poet.
Date: 10/19/2021 3:43:00 PM
Hello Mala, this is so romantic . It will be my fav. Love & Friendship Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2021 5:46:00 AM
Hello Mala, yes my fav. you are welcome. Love & Friendship, Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/19/2021 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene. Your fav? so lovely!
Date: 10/19/2021 11:37:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/19/2021 11:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chris. Your comment inspired me.

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