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I Love the Night

I love the night,
wandering in wide tranquil countryside,
in the dim light of the pinhead stars,
with their intricate constellations,
a nocturnal symphony that helps give directions
to wayward hitchhikers that roam in off course pathways.

I love the night,
imbibing the perfumes of the ambrosial countryside.
The newly cut hay, the wayside fragrant flowers,
all covered with a fine dew
spreading delicate exquisite odors in country meadows.
 
I love the night.
In the open vistas,
where all daily cares just fade away,
like wispy steam from a far off train.
A soft music can be heard behind thick hedges, 
but be aware, think not of the ugly resonance
that go bump in the night.
 
I love the night.
The winking owls hoot in lament,
grasshoppers sing in close-mouthed consent,
soggy frogs give an occasional harsh croak,
but birds sleep happily on lofty trees.
Isn't it a wonderful place to be?
Thank you, God for providing me the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 1:26 PM
I liked this poem. I love night also.
Baker Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 2:31 PM
You've shared to joys of nature at night with us in this fine poem, my friend. It was a pleasant tour, thanks for guiding us through the night. The night is a time for rest and relaxation, a time to sleep and recharge for another blessed day. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Anaya Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 10:34 AM
There is a slight Halloween flavor in your poem, Victor. Grateful for the night I am as well "but be aware, think not of the ugly resonance that go bump in the night" whimsy. We are privileged. Crickets were stirring the night before, a sound so rare to me, and I was truly grateful! Blessings to you
Williams Avatar
October 10, 2023 at 4:38 AM
What a lovely poem of the night. I guess we take so much for granted, spending our nights in front of the TV. whereas we should be perhaps looking at the beauty of the stars. There is a lot of imagery in your poetic lines, dearest Victor. I should really go out now and smell the sweet jasmine. Love and Hugs
M  Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Brilliant poem Victor bringing the night alive with your amazing imagery! Cuddles….Debx
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Victor, a wonderful poem, love all the imagery, hugs.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 12:59 AM
A beautiful poem of the night Victor, it would be lovely to live surrounded by countryside, to enjoy the peace and quiet. Wouldn’t dare to walk out at night here for fear…. Belle
Buehler Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 9:19 PM
Whatever would we do without the beauty, peace and tranquility of night? I adore the nighttime too! This is a fave for me. :)
George Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 7:53 PM
Wonderfully exhilarating poem. Every line is a joy to read. One of the best night poems I have read. This goes into my FAVE. Have a great week ahead dear Victor.
Rose  Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 4:05 PM
I always loved the night but the way you describe it it becomes even more appealing , what a poet you are !
Rolland Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 3:31 PM
beautifully penned poet, you have the chance to walk at night, in countryside, it is a privilege rally, so much things to hear and "see" in the dark, to undersatnd this confused world, i envy you, thanks for the briilliant poem
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Awesome that you love the night and enjoy being out in its abundance of sounds and sights. Do the mosquitoes bother you at night? Thanks for sharing this one with us and for your lovely visit to my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Nice writing about the night and the creatures that inhabit it!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:02 AM
I love the night: imbibing the perfumes of the ambrosial countryside… In the open vistas & the lovely imagery!
Poet Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Victor, you truly captured the essence of the night in your poem, evoking a world of romance and inspiration. Your vivid descriptions painted a picture so clear that one could almost feel the soft breeze and hear the gentle rustle of leaves. The imagery you employed throughout was nothing short of magnificent, transporting the reader into a realm of beauty and enchantment. The repetition of a particular line only served to intensify the splendor of your words, adding an extra layer of allure to the overall composition.
Romios Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 10:10 AM
A stubbing write that is wonderfully picturesque. It in Victoresque, a new word, I just created.)) You create beauty for us so seamlessly)) Nothing you write is rushed. Thank you. Pangie
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:44 AM
You conveyed perfectly the sights and sounds of the night. Great imagery throughout, Victor. The repeating line enhances the beauty of your poem.
DiMino Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 5:37 AM
Lovely imagery, Victor -- indeed, I agree. Most of my writing done during the quieted night; the night a notebook of inspiration, opened with a starry twinkle. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 4:48 AM
- What a wonderful poem ... what a wonderful night ... I hear the animals...the smell ... "the pinhead stars"glistening in the moonlight ... Love it, Victor :) - hugs
Daniel Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 2:40 AM
Such comforting words, Victor, you have brought out the calm of the night brilliantly:)
Vaso Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 2:02 AM
I will never be disappointed reading your poetry, I loved this poem!
Seeker Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:45 AM
Superb imagery ~ enjoyed the write
Jones Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Victor this is dripping deliciously with imagery. Your poem will make everyone love the night as you most certainly do!
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 1:17 AM
This is so pretty Victor, so soothing, like a sweet balm and beautiful fragrance of restful beauty.
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