I Let My Mind Go Out To Play Today

I let my mind go out to play,
And in jeans and sweatshirt in a forest lay.
Spring branches arching so high above,
Sunrays literally touching my toes.

I saw a bird of many colors,
An eagle looked down at me,
Heard the rustle of little lizards,
Through the bed of foliage the forest made for me.

The scent of waxen flowers
That grow with little light, and
Winding vines with huge madeira leaves,
Dappled the afternoon bright

There were sounds of creatures calling,
Murmurs of birds seeking roosts.
As twilight began to fall through the forest
No fear is felt.

Evening peace and patience draped
The forest like a loving blanket, and
This twilight beckoned me home.

I rose from my foliage mattress;
Sad was I to leave such friends,

But I would take what I learned
Back home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/29/2017 1:08:00 PM
This is simply delicious. Enjoyed the fresh air and the light. Love, daver
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Date: 3/30/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Daver, I hope it gave you a bit of joy.
Date: 3/28/2017 9:13:00 PM
Sun wow this is an awesome and amazing write, so dreamy...I never wanted to leave either~
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Date: 3/30/2017 6:21:00 PM
It's so much fun to close your eyes and see what you come up with. Thank you, BW.
Date: 3/28/2017 5:17:00 AM
Surely you know the natural world, and celebrate in diction and rhythm. Love-ly! Anil Deo (Wishes of Shalom).
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/30/2017 6:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Anil.
Date: 3/26/2017 2:14:00 PM
Hello Sunlite. And a wonderful play it was for you and for us readers too because you took us with you. You have the best kind of friends. This entry was lovely to read and to vision. Well done entirely.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/30/2017 6:19:00 PM
I really appreciate that, Lisa.
Date: 3/26/2017 4:43:00 AM
If only we would always 'Play and Imagine' through to our 90's as children do, the world would be a happier place. You write of nature with innocence and beauty in this gorgeous piece sunlite.:-) A joyful read. thank you. blessings, lynn
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/30/2017 6:19:00 PM
You write the nicest comments. Thank you.
Date: 3/25/2017 12:32:00 PM
What an inspirational poem you've written :) I like this, when I am in bed I do similar things I love to do, travelling to the stars and such :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/30/2017 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Darren. I guess I've been remiss in appreciation. Our power has been out for two days - a nightmare!
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