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I push open the creaking iron gate and follow a winding road that leads me to you; The wind has taken my hair and is pushing me forward, as burnt orange and yellow leaves are whirling. The air is cool as it whispers in the ancient trees and roses are decaying on the graves as I pass. I can hear my own breathing- in this silent dead place then, I am standing at your engraved stone. I did not bring you flowers on this cold day as my forever love is all that I have to give you. My darling, not a single day do I not ask why, why why- all I can leave are my tears . . . __________________ May 19, 2017 Free Verse/I Leave You My Tears Copyright Protected, ID 902773 25 Lines Contest Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 6/13/2017 5:33:00 AM
A very sad poem,it s really true that when someone you loved with all your heart left you, thier isn t and can t be a bigger grief than that, however I must congratulate you on your first position, it really was a brilliant write
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Date: 5/25/2017 9:41:00 AM
A sadly beautiful write, Constance:) congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 5/24/2017 11:46:00 PM
thanks ,good feelings
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Date: 5/22/2017 9:42:00 AM
A sad and brilliant write, Constance! Also, thank you for the win in your contest!
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Date: 5/20/2017 1:15:00 PM
Such sad imagery portrayed in this winning write, fabulous.
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Date: 5/20/2017 12:12:00 PM
So beautiful, so sad. I love your work Wings. A well deserved 1st place. Congratulations and Thank You!
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Date: 5/19/2017 4:34:00 PM
Its strange how sad can be beautiful. You created this wonderful heartfelt poem. Nostalgic thoughts were awakened in me. Regards, Craig
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Date: 5/19/2017 12:51:00 PM
Your poem made my mind travel to the grave sites of my little family even though it was written to only one. Why, why, why, indeed!
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Date: 5/19/2017 12:02:00 PM
So sad and heartfelt...you create such deep feelings in your poetry...lovely
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:42:00 AM
beautiful.
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:24:00 AM
This poem is achingly sad my friend. This one touched the heart deeply, I felt a chill as I read this today.
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