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I Knew

A sweet smile overcame you one I've known many times before no words could make a difference I was trapped behind that door once jiggling upon the table dancing to every move you'd make but now I sit here waiting dwelling my mistakes I know you have another I see the footprints in the snow you tiptoe around the questions as the tension ever grows I failed for I allowed it giving with an open heart the last balloon has left my fingers farewell it's sweet depart

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Date: 12/9/2016 12:39:00 AM
Good all your pieces!
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Date: 11/19/2016 5:42:00 PM
wow POTD many congrats Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2016 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! It is a very touching poem :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Carol
Date: 11/18/2016 2:01:00 PM
Congrats on d well deserved potd.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thanks Charmu...long day...just got home from getting my oldest...he has a 9 day break
Date: 11/18/2016 11:17:00 AM
Really moving Tim, touched my heart, congrats!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thanks Paloma...much appreciated
Date: 11/18/2016 10:06:00 AM
Congrats Tim... This one hit a Homerun for me! Sad, touching and beautiful... xoxo!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thanks Akkina
Date: 11/18/2016 9:41:00 AM
This is superb Tim!Congrats!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 11/18/2016 9:38:00 AM
It always surprises me when someone says they "didn't know." This someone knew and still faced the sadness of the ending. Such a great and tender poem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thanks so much
Date: 11/18/2016 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD... Beautiful write...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thanks Supraja
Date: 11/18/2016 9:01:00 AM
Back to offer my congratulations for POTD Tim. Nice write:)
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Date: 11/18/2016 8:35:00 AM
Many wowsas! Reading your romantic PO's almost always leaves me speechless. I hope you can hear my applause. ~ j
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:14:00 PM
Thanks John
Date: 11/18/2016 7:46:00 AM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Alexis
Date: 11/18/2016 7:29:00 AM
congrats on poem of the day sweets, well done.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thanks Cas
Date: 11/18/2016 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful write Tim, congratulations on POTD honors...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 11/18/2016 6:07:00 AM
- Congratulations, Tim ! - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:45:00 AM
sullenly beautiful, tim... you break my heart!.. huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thanks nette
Date: 11/17/2016 8:17:00 AM
very touching and sad Tim - I love the letting go f the balloon line especially - brought a lump to my throat oh so sad:-( hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 11/17/2016 6:42:00 AM
- A touching poem,Tim - .... tell me, it was just a bad dream .... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:11:00 PM
Thanks A-L
Date: 11/16/2016 4:56:00 PM
"there are plenty of balloons in the sea" :) This poem conveying sadness, it is so very well written!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:10:00 PM
Lol...too many
Date: 11/16/2016 3:51:00 PM
Have you ever heard of the old black and white "Our Gang" with Spanky and Buckwheat? They once decided to make a "he man woman haters club" it was so funny. When loneliness really starts to drag me down, I try to search for humor. Very sad write, my friend. I have no "forever love" either.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2016 11:09:00 PM
I do remember... thank you DT
Date: 11/16/2016 2:09:00 PM
Very sad...so sad this is...When the one we love is gone..to another..or even just gone...Heart-moving poem Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/16/2016 2:40:00 PM
I wish it wasn't the case and I had a forever love like in the notebook. I guess that's how it goes. Thanks again for stopping by one of my poems.
Date: 11/16/2016 11:14:00 AM
Such sadness is felt in this lonely but lovely poem Tim. Goodbyes are always hard it seems.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/16/2016 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Chris. You are right..very difficult
Date: 11/16/2016 10:09:00 AM
very touching and sad, tim, but beautifully written...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/16/2016 2:35:00 PM
Thank you ilene
Date: 11/16/2016 9:19:00 AM
Sad but a wonderful write
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/16/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Mike
Date: 11/16/2016 9:11:00 AM
Tim - Very well written. Just heartbreaking and so hard to say farewell.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/16/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thanks Heidi

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