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I Hear the Wind

I hear the wind whispering to the trees while it blows strands of hair into my face; playful-like, not so intense to displease. As Autumn's breath morphs into a brisk breeze and the setting sun weaves crystalline lace; I hear the wind whispering to the trees. Magically enchanted raindrops freeze and snowflakes fall at a quickening pace; playful-like, not so intense to displease. A thing of beauty, an optical tease; as a scarlet sun sinks without a trace, I hear the wind whispering to the trees. Observing alternate realities evolution and blind faith interface; playful-like, not so intense to displease. As temperatures drop a few degrees, a splattering of flakes fall into place. I hear the wind whispering to the trees; playful-like, not so intense to displease.
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Date: 1/29/2020 11:21:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Emile, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/30/2020 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate of your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/29/2020 8:42:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this piece with your prudent "Season observation" ... through your enchanting poetic style, virtually making me experience it. God bless you.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/30/2020 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate of your support and wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/29/2020 6:37:00 PM
Emile, love your ode to Winter in this Villanelle. Enjoyed the two repeating lines and the multiple alliterations. Congrats! ~ John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/30/2020 8:41:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate of your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/29/2020 2:38:00 PM
Nicely balanced, easy to read fluidity Emile, my compliments on 8th place and thanks for your participation.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/29/2020 2:46:00 PM
Thank you William, I appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/21/2019 5:54:00 PM
Wonderful write Emile, congrats on a great contest win, very deserving I must say.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/22/2019 6:36:00 AM
Thank you John, I am so appreciative of your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/16/2019 5:05:00 PM
Hi Emile: Such a pleasing pulsing villanelle ala Dylan Thomas! I have written several until I got it right but it is difficult with me. CONGRATULATIONS!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2019 9:18:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, it's always a treat to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2019 7:46:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Emile. as magical, enchanted as your raindrops, a thing of beauty and imagination. congrats on a top win.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2019 9:17:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne, I am so appreciative of your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2019 7:36:00 PM
Emile congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and I love your image too
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/13/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Constance, your contest are always fun to participate in my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2019 6:09:00 PM
I love this form and you wrote it with such ease, congrats :)-luloo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/13/2019 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Lu Loo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/10/2019 12:53:00 PM
Emile, I must agree with Heidi's assessment of your poem 'I Hear The Wind'. No two snowflakes are ever alike, and so too poets. -Richard
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/10/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Richard, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/10/2019 12:06:00 PM
This is an absolute beautiful poem. So well written. I enjoyed this very much :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/10/2019 12:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
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