I Have Been To Places of Great Death

I have been to places of great death:
walking the battlefield at Gettysburg,
as a lusty young man of no firm belief
who stepped between the great rocks
of Devil's Den and felt his soul shudder
as though he had been a soldier there,
and died in fear a long, long time ago.

I taught my tongue to the gentle Khmers
as civil war raged and the killing fields
were being sown-- I left before the 
heartless murdering began, the killing
of over a million: teachers and students,
doctors and peasants, the old, the young,
each with a photo taken before dying,
their images taped to classroom walls.

And when I visited Hiroshima, now myself
chastened by death's touch, and knowing
my soul real, knowing of meaning absolute
and of unseen forces working good or ill,
as I stood at the first ground zero, I once
again shuddered to feel the pull of madness
(though I knew not if it was my own or some
remains of that evil which brought the fire 
and brimstone of a world wide war...).

But by then I knew I could pray, and so
opened my desperate heart and sought 
His mercy. Suddenly I saw a sort of angel
who took me from that place of insanity,
healing me while we wandered by the 
beauty of the Inland Sea as my storm
calmed and left me, never to return....

I have been to places of great death, and
I have felt death's cold, careless hands.
Yet now I know what death itself fears:
the Light, the light eternal which carries
souls beyond time itself, like the winds
of a Love exceeding all understanding.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Alex Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 10:39 PM
"the winds of a Love exceeding all understanding" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 6:55 AM
Sorry for my late reply--been away--but thanks so much!
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Congrats on your win and thanks for participating :)
Carber Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 11:12 AM
Thank you!
Stathakis Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 12:14 PM
A powerful statement and message, beautifully done L.J.
Carber Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, George, and may you have a healthy and most productive 2022!
Radice Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Outstanding.
Carber Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 5:44 AM
Thank you Gary-- and have a healthy and most creative 2022 !
Delaney Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 4:50 AM
Congratulations LJ: I felt the heaviness of trying to comprehend the madness of war. Magnificent write. SuZ
Carber Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:41 AM
there can be no comprehension, really--thanks!
Kauffman Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Back with congratulations on this remarkable poem LJ! So happy to see it on the winners list again. Blessings to you!
Carber Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Thanks Sam!
Alex Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:26 PM
Death is not deathless or fearless. Congratulations!
Carber Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Thank you!
Kauffman Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Back with congratulations LJ! So glad you brought back this powerfully written poem. I will never forget the devastation at the World Trade center but I agree with you about the power of Light and Love. All the best. Blessings of love and light to you!
Carber Avatar
January 26, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Thanks Sam--we really are an unique species, capable of both the worst cruelty or the deepest kindness. May you and yours have a blessed 2021.
George   Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 6:54 AM
SO POWERFUL! Many congrats on your fine win.e ~ Elaine
Carber Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 7:47 AM
Thank you Elaine, it's one of those poems I wish I didn't have to write.
Kauffman Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 1:07 PM
So powerful LJ. I too have visited battlefields and felt overwhelmed by their enormity. Congratulations on your win.
Carber Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Thank you, Sam
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:16 PM
LJ congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write !
Carber Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Forgive me! Somehow I missed thanking you before--
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:41 PM
- Congratulations on your great win, L.J. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Please forgive me--somehow I missed thanking you at the time--
Mcgee Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:50 PM
Congratulations on your top win with your well penned poem. I really felt I too went with you.
Carber Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Thank you, Jeanne, I think you've given me the highest compliment a write can get!
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 10:17 AM
My friend, Congratulations on your placement in SilentOne's Crossroads contest!
Carber Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Thank my old friend!
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations L.J on your win--so much intensity in your write--powerful!
Carber Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Thank you, Vijay
One Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Carber Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Thank you, Silent one
Ashley Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 8:03 PM
L. J., I am awe-struck (..but not surprised) by your masterful expression of such profound introspection. A powerfully inspiring masterwork of moving intensity and beauty. It was a privilege to read and a fav! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Carber Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 9:18 AM
No, the privilege is mine, Susan , to have such acute and sensitive readers as yourself-- thank you so very much.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Wow L.J., this is a masterpiece! Truly deserving of your high placement. I was moved by your insightful words and this winning piece is going into my faves. I am so glad you entered it so I had a chance to read it. Thank you and Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
Carber Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 9:16 AM
Thank you Connie--it is very much appreciated.
Barden Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:40 AM
LJ - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
Carber Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Gregory, truly much appreciated!
Shetley Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 2:04 PM
I was truly moved by this piece and appreciate so much your entry into my Foreign travels contest. Congrats on your placement!
Shetley Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:11 PM
It wasn't exactly what I intended but one of the things I love about contest topics is they are open to poetic interpretation. Since there was actually Foreign Travel in this piece, and it was so moving, I had to place it high.
Carber Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Thank you very much for the honor-- I wasn't sure if it was the sort of 'travel' for which the contest was intended.
Martin Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Powerful message in this poetry - the number of times we say "never again"! Congratulations Len! :-)
Carber Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Thank you, Mark, I very much appreciate your thoughtful words.
Scars Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 1:45 PM
len, this is so intense it made my head spin! great poem...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Carber Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Laura Loo--- those places made my soul spin!!!
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