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I Found My Love!!!

I found my love in a light where i was lost he took me by the hand and we shared the love for a while. Then we gave each other a kiss and told each that i found my long lost love that we been looking for all our love lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/22/2009 12:55:00 PM
Congrats Amanda on your personification being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:32:00 AM
Amanda - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/20/2009 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature of the week, Amanda. Lainie
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Date: 1/20/2009 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature of the week, Amanda. Lainie
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Date: 1/20/2009 2:37:00 PM
Glad you found love! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/20/2009 9:06:00 AM
Amamda - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/19/2009 4:16:00 PM
congrats Amanda! keep writing....*Maryam
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Date: 1/19/2009 3:38:00 PM
A breathless utterance indeed! Enjoyed though. Give us some more. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 1/19/2009 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:09:00 AM
Congrats on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/8/2009 8:40:00 PM
The beginning of a great poem here Amanda. May I suggest to express inner feelings some to go with the flow of this truly special account? you may also use imagery; that is to paint a picture with your words... keep writing, seriously I was making rhymes at the age 5 and throughout my teens, you grow here, you can always find what you need, good advice to steer you along the way :) Beautiful sentiments, life is wonderous..
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:03:00 AM
Good :)
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