I Found My Love!!!

I found my love in a light where i was lost he took me by the hand and we shared the love 
for a while. Then we gave each other a kiss and told each that i found my long lost love that 
we been looking for all our love lives.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 12:55 PM
Congrats Amanda on your personification being featured this week. Vince
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Amanda - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
George   Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 6:40 PM
Congratulations on your feature of the week, Amanda. Lainie
George   Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 6:39 PM
Congratulations on your feature of the week, Amanda. Lainie
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January 20, 2009 at 2:37 PM
Glad you found love! Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Jordan Avatar
January 20, 2009 at 9:06 AM
Amamda - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Haniff Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 4:16 PM
congrats Amanda! keep writing....*Maryam
Austin Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 3:38 PM
A breathless utterance indeed! Enjoyed though. Give us some more. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
January 19, 2009 at 9:09 AM
Congrats on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
Bulger Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 8:40 PM
The beginning of a great poem here Amanda. May I suggest to express inner feelings some to go with the flow of this truly special account? you may also use imagery; that is to paint a picture with your words... keep writing, seriously I was making rhymes at the age 5 and throughout my teens, you grow here, you can always find what you need, good advice to steer you along the way :) Beautiful sentiments, life is wonderous..
Montgomery Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 9:03 AM
Good :)
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