Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Free verse

I F I Could

..............................If I could scoop every tear ever shed for   LOVE
                    Create an ocean of emotion opened to one and     A L L
                      A mingling of passions, dreams, a host of family POETS
                              If I could collect  mankind’s memories :  THOUGHTS
                     From the beginning  of time , the beginning of :   FEELINGS
                      Astute minds , with quill in hand, record the first  EMOTIONS
                               If I could gather all the pieces  of a broken   HEART
                     Mend , sew it back together : forgetting  the pain it   FELT
                     Throbs ;  with new vigor : beating a love song of     POETRY

                          If I could write as my fellow Poets on  “POETRYSOUP”
                                                      I WOULD

                               Dedicated to All the POETS on POETRYSOUP

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Laura Breidenthal February 15, 2012 at 10:53 PM Pure beauty! :J Really enjoyed this one and the style of course. Always, Laura

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 21, 2011 at 3:45 PM Congrats HG on this creative write being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown February 21, 2011 at 1:46 PM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup HG. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff February 20, 2011 at 7:35 PM Congratulations on your featured poem this week. More power and success. Ernilando

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 20, 2011 at 7:25 PM Congrats HG my silent beau on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all with luv.. forever enjoyed by your "Sweetheart"...

Lynette Chachere February 13, 2010 at 11:07 AM That ocean would be phenomanel. Very thoughtful write. and yes i really did enjoy your "Dark Pathway" because it was amazing that i could hear. and thats sweet of you to write a poem for me.i will cherish it.your a wonderful friend, i can't tell you how much you are. i can only wonder why you are so kind to others. -Always Lynn

Barbara Gorelick December 10, 2009 at 12:06 PM this is a wonderful piece HG.. I think it is one of my favorites too. Clever man you are..I dont know how I missed it before. Congrats my dear. BG

Barbara Gorelick December 10, 2009 at 12:06 PM this is a wonderful piece HG.. I think it is one of my favorites too. Clever man you are..I dont know how I missed it before. Congrats my dear. BG

Jesu Johnson December 9, 2009 at 2:25 PM What a moving piece of ARTISTRY!!!!!! I enjoyed every line.

Janette Fisher December 9, 2009 at 11:41 AM Many congrats on your wonderful featured poem this week. Rgds Janette

Anthony Nutter December 9, 2009 at 2:51 AM Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter

December 8, 2009 at 5:37 PM So creative! I love the way the words on the right make up their own poem. What an uplifting piece. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown December 8, 2009 at 4:48 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week HG. May you have many more as you my forever friend have become the wonderful poet I told you that you would become. Love, Carol

Elaine George December 7, 2009 at 4:16 PM My friend, you write as only you can. Uniquely and beautifully from the depths of your soul. Thank you for this wonderful heart-felt dedication. Lainie

James Fraser December 7, 2009 at 12:27 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James

Carrie Richards December 7, 2009 at 10:13 AM Congratulations on this fine dedication being featured this week! So lovely the sentiments! ~ Carrie

Brian Strand December 6, 2009 at 11:57 PM Congrats on your feature poem this week HG.Rgds Brian

Danielle White December 6, 2009 at 11:56 PM Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***

Brandee Augustus December 6, 2009 at 11:55 AM Thanks for this! But, all you have to do is write who you are and what you're capable of doing. This is an awesome write and I think it can be dedicated to anyone that has a creative gift. Well done!

Cecil Hickman May 19, 2009 at 9:30 PM truly this is an amazing piece I am so sorry it has taken me so long to read this but finally i have and it was worth more than the wait and i shall return and read this one again and again, a tribute as well two poems in one written with style,wisdom love,friendship,, all the things that makes the human race ,,(Human) thank you for writing this for everyone and as well this is a treasure and masterpiece written from an amazingly talented poet for sure,,,blessings...Cecil

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 14, 2009 at 3:42 AM Once again, this is great! I'm getting ready to credit you with this form. You have soup mail. Love, DAne

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 11, 2009 at 2:19 AM HG, You, my fellow poet, write extremely well. This poem form is so unique. You need to name it and if possible run a contest requiring poets to write in that form (whatever you name it) Your legacy will be born. I don't recall ever seeing a poem before where the end words create an image of their own as does the poem as a whole. (Am I right or wrong?) Have a wonderful day. Lovinglt, Dane

Vince Suzadail Jr. May 7, 2009 at 9:28 AM Creative write HG. Vince

Charmaine Chircop April 4, 2009 at 10:16 PM wow,i'm glad i didn't miss reading this one,so deep,so emotional-bravo

Robin L. Gass March 29, 2009 at 5:15 PM HG, this is such a lovely dedication! I am enjoying reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you again for your kind comments and for sharing! Love, Robin

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