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I can't watch a happy ending, Guy gets the gal, Girl gets her pal, I can't do it with out crying. Maybe I'm like you, maybe you cry too. I'll tell you why I do, will you tell me too. I never got mine. Said I'd be fine. That was just a line. I feel alone...no sign! I've heard nothing from the sky that somehow I'd get by, survive until one day I'd die, without my piece of the pie. I never drop a tear or two, it's much more like a bad flu. Flows out of me without a clue.  My pain has never left, it just grew. That's why I cry when I see love on the screen, it's love I crave, that one woman and no screen. That's why I want to have the love I've never seen, love that lasts a lifetime and not just on the screen. when my wife and i were in love...before she became my ex...every moment of  every day i would live her... i had the wings of pegasus the strength of samson...i had the conviction of ghandi...the vision of van gogh...i was different then. love anchored me...both feet on the ground i was rooted...focused...i was... but enough of the hyperbole... i was happy! real love does that...links us to the better part of life... i was naive... it didn't last... she cut my hair... took away my strength... while i was thinking forever...she was thinking it's over...i was all in but she held the better hand...i lost everything! i would draw hearts with my finger on black tinted glass on rainy days or nights...a contract i should have never signed... i was a mythological character...everyday the crows would feed on my flesh...on my internal organs...slowly...painfully i died... than every morning once again alive... and again the crows would feed... sometimes things are so transparent... they don't need proof...they are self evident. it is better not to challenge the heavens ...i accept my fate hold tight to my faith. I can't watch a happy ending. Maybe I'm like you. I never got mine. I've heard nothing from the sky. I never drop a tear or two. That is why I cry when I see love on the screen. 21~12~2014 With Love Maurice Yvonne

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Date: 3/20/2017 4:47:00 PM
You write from the heart, Armand. I'm touched by the way you express this sweet-sour personal experience. Never say never...love is never far off! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/22/2016 4:19:00 PM
Checking on the elderly : ))
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Date: 12/21/2014 9:13:00 PM
You are correct -- love is never, ever easy!! Be strong my brother -- I send love, not as a woman but as a dear friend. I will be your encourager -- sending you strength and resolve -- to fight again, to love again, to live life to the fullest. Keep me posted . . . I am here to help.
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Date: 12/21/2014 5:57:00 PM
This is very different from you, Maurice. It's as if you are writing your feelings about love as a song. I can almost hear it as a song inside a play!! Also it feels like half rhymed and half free verse. a very interesting one. emotive without being gushy . Love it. and you know what that means. ..... !!! (does Jan actually give 7 faves, you know it's not possible to do that, is it?)
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Date: 12/21/2014 5:21:00 PM
Hugs my friend, one day you will be happy again, I am sure .....Seren
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Date: 12/21/2014 3:32:00 PM
Such a heartfelt write Maurice we get learn so much more about you from this emotional write - Don't give up hope my friend there are some wonderful people out there it's just finding them that is the obstacle sometimes:-) 7 faves hope to see it as poem of the week! I LOVE it from the bottom of MY heart:-)
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Date: 12/21/2014 3:21:00 PM
tremendous expo on love in all its phases, Maurice... you really got me going with this defining read.. hugggs!
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Date: 12/21/2014 3:08:00 PM
A very heartfelt introspection Maurice... I felt like you many a day....never give up hope...Tim
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Date: 12/21/2014 2:25:00 PM
Ouch..I have a lump in my troath,for many reasons.Your poem just squeezed my heart like an orange. Good clean love is the only kind of love!!Another favourite
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Date: 12/21/2014 2:24:00 PM
This is a powerfully emotive piece. There was a time I thought there would be no happy ending in my life, Thankfuly I was wrong. I have never been happier being wrong.
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