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I Don'T Know

I don’t know that poetry should be particularly wise… though it should be interesting; as love need not be entirely spoken... for it is better known by its presence life’s stars come and go depending on the season, and who is out to watch – skies shaping their clouds to fit (or is it visa/versa?) for every expression seems to have its own, individual hopes and dreams… I wonder if God really chooses to see and know all in advance – or His Greatest joy and experience, are our moments of seeming miraculous discovery ...and the uncontrollable, indeed childlike excitement that follows...

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Date: 7/16/2020 8:56:00 PM
Rereading this, I concur with my initial comment on June 30 --- only more so! Huzzah! ~ Gershon
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/17/2020 9:14:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon; have a beautiful day my friend. Blessings!!
Date: 6/30/2020 8:05:00 PM
'as love need not be entirely spoken...for it is better known by its presence..." Joe: I don't know if I've laid eyes on a better stanza of free verse this year. Awesome! Thanks, Gershon
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon; I really don't know what to say. You made my day my friend. Blessings!
Date: 6/30/2020 12:52:00 PM
Great insight into the mind of the Creator...in our infinitesimal thinking...it might take light years to catch up lol... a great read Joe...thanks for stopping by...^WW^ :o)
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