I Don't Feel You

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Verse 1)

You lay here beside me, but I feel so alone,

Your touch don’t feel like it’s mine, just skin and bone.

Every day, every year, I wonder what’s wrong,

When you say you love me, but it don’t feel strong.

(Chorus)

I don’t feel your love, I’m reaching for more,

We’re living in a house, but we’re strangers at the door.

I’m walking beside you, but my heart’s out of place,

Searching for a feeling I can’t seem to trace.

(Verse 2)

We share the moments, but your eyes don’t see,

The way I’m longing for love, the way I need to be.

Half my heart’s waiting, for something real,

But I can’t make you love me, no matter how I feel.

(Chorus)

I don’t feel your love,  I’m reaching for more,

We’re living in a house, but we’re strangers at the door.

I’m walking beside you, but my heart’s out of place,

Searching for a feeling I can’t seem to trace.

(Bridge)

I’ve tried to reach you, but it’s like you’re not here,

I’m standing in the dark, still wishing you’d appear.

Maybe one day, you’ll see what lives about,

But for now, I’m standing, still waiting for love to come.

(Outro)

I don’t want to stay in this space of doubt,

I’m longing for love that’s real, no more running about.

I need to feel something that comes from the heart,

Cause right now, it feels like we’re worlds apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 9/4/2025 8:13:00 AM
A fantastic lyric. Your words flow smoothly while maintaining meaningful rhyme. (Just an aside, he's found someone else.) Familiar, I'll fav.
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Date: 7/22/2025 9:43:00 PM
Well done, Congrats Jeanine. Simplicity of poem matches music. Whispery yet strong. ThkU.x
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Date: 7/22/2025 3:12:00 PM
Did you get a professional to sing this. Is it AI produced? The quality is amazing. The lyrics are so emotive. Love your song. Congrats on the win
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Date: 7/22/2025 2:40:00 PM
Jeanine, amazing, I love your song, beautifully done, congratulations on your win in the contest, a fav, Constance
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Date: 7/22/2025 6:03:00 AM
Woe... I'm i need to know if this is all you? Or is this done with AI? EITHER WAY it's beautiful and amazing but even more so if it is you. Congrats! Xo
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Date: 7/22/2025 4:41:00 AM
What a passionate song! Lovely lyrics and voice! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/21/2025 6:36:00 PM
This is outstanding!
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Date: 7/21/2025 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations for your placement in my 'make a song contest'. A fantastic song - very well done! I hope you will be inspired to add music and songs to more of your poems. Lets get more music here!!
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Date: 7/14/2025 2:46:00 AM
• Impressive • Creative • Heartbreaking • Painful • Emotional • Bomb • Eloquent Wordsmith • Relatable • Preach • Awesome • That Part • Pure Truth • I'm Sayin' • Exact • Powerful • Deep • Enjoyable • Addictive Read • Entertaining • Congratulations • First Place • Perfectly Penned • Standing Ovation • You're Definitely An Artist
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