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I love you, but they say I can't For I'll extinguish you But that I will defy That fiery independence You bow before me and hide How can I kill the one I love? You hate, you say, and run From me, I will pursue Will stalk your every trunk and twig, your every shoot and limb. What you devour I soothe, I cry on your anger My tears will quench your ire Until you give yourself to me My arms and body douse your rage. You will surrender We both will leave fertile soil behind, offspring will grow. *** March 26, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/4/2017 10:43:00 AM

Ah ... a dual personification, eh. Very clever sneaky of you, Darren. This is, however, a masterfully crafted poem of emotional depth and spiritual simplicity. Cooling waters of forgiveness and compassion soothes the raging fires within a soul. Splendid poetry from a talented wordsmith. Love and peace forever.

Paul Dandrea

Date: 5/12/2017 2:16:00 PM

From reading several of your poems I see that the way of love is not an easy and smooth one for you. In spite of that, your work is full of messages of hope when things are going badly and joy in the struggle itself. I love the last line of I Cry on Your Anger, "You will surrender We both will leave fertile soil behind, offspring will grow." That's what poetry is all about, a statement of the problem and then a masterful whiplash of a solution at the end.

Darren White
Date: 5/12/2017 2:24:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poems, and also for appreciating the last lines in this poem. This makes me very happy.

Jeremy Smith

Date: 4/20/2017 12:28:00 AM

great work. Is it the burning bush?

Darren White
Date: 4/20/2017 12:56:00 AM

No one managed to guess the personification right, so I will tell you :) It's about wild fire and water to extinguish it, leaving fertile soil behind for new growth

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/5/2017 8:38:00 AM

Impressive!

Darren White
Date: 4/5/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thank you, it is a personification, but no one guessed what it is :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/30/2017 11:59:00 PM

I cry with no anger at all.................

Darren White
Date: 3/31/2017 12:03:00 AM

come here and I will dry your tears.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/30/2017 7:35:00 PM

I love the superb way you ended this poem I can so closely relate too Darren. 7 ; )

Darren White
Date: 3/31/2017 12:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/30/2017 2:17:00 PM

No matter what, He loves,He overcomes the anger of the other with deep passionate love..till the other surrender.A powerful roaring piece...Im so happy you visited my poetry early.Take your time .. Just so happy you are a bit better..Hporay.:)

Darren White
Date: 3/31/2017 12:05:00 AM

Thank you Charma, I do little bits and then fall asleep again :)

Poetprentice Dupins

Date: 3/30/2017 12:24:00 AM

A very well-written personified poem. This is some good soup (poetry)!

Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:19:00 AM

thanks so much!

White Wolf

Date: 3/28/2017 4:49:00 AM

I love how cryptic this one is! Can be interpreted in so many ways! I've already read it twice....And... I think I'll read it again! ~~~/|\~~~

Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:19:00 AM

hey there budgie :) thanks

Tatianna Leachet

Date: 3/27/2017 1:02:00 AM

This was very beautifully written. I enjoyed reading this poem greatly.

Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:18:00 AM

thank you tatianna :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/26/2017 6:53:00 PM

Such beautiful prose of deep contemplation!

Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:15:00 AM

<3 :) my friend

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/26/2017 2:10:00 PM

Indeed - cryptic, O international man of mystery. ; ) "extinguish" and then pretty soon "fiery independence" yah baby good stuff.

Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:16:00 AM

how close you are btw, extinguish and fiery :) now tell me what I am

Darren White
Date: 3/30/2017 4:15:00 AM

hah doug, thank you

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/26/2017 9:53:00 AM

Your poetry blooms flowers of humanity and wisdom Darren, I am nourished by your offerings. Thank you :) xomo

Darren White
Date: 3/26/2017 10:00:00 AM

Maureen, thank you, it grows and blooms indeed :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/26/2017 8:03:00 AM

I love the personification...It has something to do with the tree...Must be a catapilliar or some other insect that lives of the nourishment of the tree.....But I'm probably wrong : ))

Darren White
Date: 3/26/2017 9:59:00 AM

It has SOMETHING to do with the tree, oooohhh so cryptic ;) OK time to leave, see you hopefully soon :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/26/2017 5:48:00 AM

Dear Darren. Good Morning. This entry is ever so expressive moving and poetic. I am honored and privileged each time I turn to your page and work. The title alone is poetic and moving. Have a wonderful morning.

Doug Vinson
Date: 3/26/2017 2:06:00 PM

Psst... Darren - I think she like you.

Darren White
Date: 3/26/2017 7:34:00 AM

Hah Lisa, morning :) Thank you for the kind words.

Anil Deo

Date: 3/26/2017 4:43:00 AM

Seeds and nuts are packed with life and energy; loved the illustration. I felt some sadness in reading this: you rise to the challenge in all loving - allow each to grow, flourish. Shalom!

Darren White
Date: 3/26/2017 7:32:00 AM

Yes, that illustration is wonderful, I agree :) Thank you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/26/2017 4:42:00 AM

Determination of the soul plants the seeds of future dear, Darren! Wondrous writing. A sven!

Darren White
Date: 3/26/2017 7:35:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words and the seven :)