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I Count On Your Love

Italian sonnet How deep thy love for me, so very broad One cannot miss the peace that calms the eyes. With grace and joy and patience, I surmise Thy sweet love’s a virtue, I can applaud. The love I offer thee is surely flawed, Sincere but juvenile, a compromise. Might I grow in love fed by one so wise? I count on thee, my lovely goldenrod. Thine is the flower my love needs to mature to help me emulate thine eloquence. Bright goldenrod, thy medicine can cure raw jealousy and pride and reticence which stay my feelings, make me insecure. Thy hand I take to gain my confidence. written 13 February 2016 a response to Elizabeth Barret Browning's How Do I Love Thee, Let Me Count the Ways

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Date: 2/27/2016 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Just beautiful!
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:11:00 AM
Greetings Reason. Congrats for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/25/2016 2:02:00 AM
Such lovely lines, Reason...congrats on a wonderful win! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:33:00 AM
Reason, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love Linda
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Date: 2/22/2016 10:48:00 PM
Congrats on great win with this superb sonnet Reason.
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Date: 2/22/2016 2:49:00 PM
Well done and congratulations on this win, Reason.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning sonnet. The love is overflowing. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 2/22/2016 10:31:00 AM
Very nice job
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