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I wrote this poem in June 2016, a tribute to the people who died in the Orlando-Pulse shooting.

The acrobats below in their dance: >>   https://youtu.be/YtnJUS30olE

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The day will come that I will dance with you, It doesn’t really matter how My love. Our dance evolves so slow and warm and light. We live and shine in your bright eyes, My love. We're dancing for ourselves, our love, our rights, Our independency, we'll waltz, My love. So much to overcome but it is worth the fight, To have you so, so near My love. To overcome the fear, we are so absolutely right, Admit it to ourselves, admit it loud and clear My love. The day will come that I will dance with you, Will have you so, so near, My love. When everything comes tumbling down around, Together we still dance, upright. My love. We’ll overcome the fear, we are so absolutely right. For us we live, for us we’ll always fight, My love. I close you in my arms and close my burning eyes, And you will hold me to you, hold me tight, My love. My body is so small, and in your arms so slight, But I’ll guide you through the night My love. This dance is sensually slow, it takes us step by step To where our future lives, My love. The day will come that I will dance with you. I know I will, and so do you, My love. *** Repost from June 2016

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Date: 1/25/2017 8:04:00 PM
This is such a beautiful poem and a great tribute to love - perfect <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/26/2017 9:22:00 AM
It really is :)
Date: 1/24/2017 7:23:00 PM
I'm glad you shared it with us. I'm going to buy it for my friend. Thank you so much :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 11:28:00 PM
Thank YOU :)
Date: 1/24/2017 2:42:00 PM
I remember this beautiful poem...thanks for the re-post.
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 2:44:00 PM
You're welcome :) I revamped it a bit.
Date: 1/24/2017 12:53:00 PM
How I love the repetition of my love. Beautiful, Darren. So touching. I'm so sad for those who needlessly lost their lives.
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Eileen! Yes, I and many with me were very upset. I also love the poem, the repetition takes the speed out of the poem, and that is exactly my intention.
Date: 1/24/2017 10:32:00 AM
Oh how beautiful is this. If I still have my Facebook, I would've asked you if I can post it there. I have a friend who was at the club that night. Thank God he's alright. Anyways this is very sweet, I love it! A fave :)
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 11:23:00 AM
After Pulse, a group writers (not from Soup) and I published a poetry anthology, proceeds are for victims and their families. I'll shamelessly do an advert here, I hope you don't mind. One of my poems is in there. Not this one. I am glad your friend is alright!....
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 11:23:00 AM
https://www.amazon.com/LOVE-Poetry-Anthology-Orlandos-survivors-ebook/dp/B01I115VJO/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1485278544&sr=8-1&keywords=love+is+love+poetry+anthology
Date: 1/24/2017 10:07:00 AM
The melody you create with your wonderful words has us all dancing in poetic enchantment Darren. Very beautiful my friend.
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Chris, I heard it in my head as I was writing :)
Date: 1/24/2017 9:36:00 AM
Like the dance, the read was pleasurably slow too ... in the course of enjoying the rhymes of romance ...
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 9:38:00 AM
I am really glad you recognize that. It IS a slow romantic dance
Date: 1/24/2017 9:10:00 AM
You are a true romantic, Duir! A great tribute! Well done my friend /|\
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Darren White
Date: 1/24/2017 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Budgie :) I love this slow dance.

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