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I Can'T Go On Like This

Take me to my Halcyon, The place where all my grief is gone While I'm unsure if Peace is pure- When all I do is wrong!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/25/2013 8:03:00 AM
strong and powerful words. Thought provoking and honest. nice job
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Date: 9/25/2013 8:19:00 AM
Thanks, Robin; I appreciate that. Thanks for taking time to read and review :)
Date: 9/11/2013 3:15:00 PM
Your poetry sure isnt wrong!BG
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:23:00 PM
lol Thanks, Barbara :)

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