I can't compete with your vanity

You spent an hour in the mirror—
I spent an hour in the bar.
Your lipstick’s a death sentence
I don’t want to serve.

I walk through these rooms,
thinking of small deaths,
wishing I had the nerve
to pack up and leave.

You think I envy your silk shirts,
your hair that floats like smoke.
But I have my own ruin to feed
with whiskey and cigarette ash.

You are not my hero,
you are not my god—
you are a billboard
I no longer want to read.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Mclain Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Thank you Karen, it is growing increasingly more difficult concerning crashing on the rocks, it's people like you that I of course write for.
Jones Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 3:23 PM
Woah! That’s some intense dislike and passionate dislike. I felt that! Good job.
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