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I Barely Remember

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I barely remember the me I used to be the me before I met you that many years ago I hardly remember the me I used to be the me that was in wait of you and did not know it I narrowly remember the me I used to be the me that was missing the you to make me whole I do remember how my life was suddenly transformed and never wanting to look back AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on July 30, 2020 for contest DUSTY OLD MEMORIES sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 2ND

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/8/2020 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love is very powerful. A wonderful walk through time and memories. Enjoy your win and weekend..........

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/8/2020 11:12:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paula. Most appreciated.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/8/2020 4:20:00 AM

This sends such a powerful message of freedom and strong vibes Line. Congratulations on your win! :) Much love

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/8/2020 5:40:00 AM

Thank you very much, Aditi.

Constance La France

Date: 8/7/2020 12:37:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my memories challenge with this wonderful write _Constance

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/8/2020 5:40:00 AM

Thank you so much, Constance. Much appreciated ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/7/2020 1:32:00 AM

- A lovely thought to bring to light, Line :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2020 7:03:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ~

John Watt

Date: 8/6/2020 11:18:00 PM

I love this with its form and repeats and slightly varying 1st lines. But the message is endearing - The me that once was is like a different person now. Lovely and romantic, Line. Congrats on your win ~ John

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/7/2020 7:04:00 AM

Thanks, John. Much appreciated~

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/4/2020 3:48:00 PM

Great entry!

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2020 4:50:00 PM

Thank, Timothy. Much appreciated ~

Julie Achilles

Date: 7/30/2020 3:48:00 AM

The Me I used to be- touching Good Luck with the contest. Regards Julie

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/30/2020 3:52:00 AM

Thanks, Julie.