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For the beautiful contest and line of inquiry by Unseeking Seeker ~ 

Thank you so much everyone, for your enchanting comments and poetic presence, I am grateful beyond words. 

Also, writing this was such a spiritual healing experience, for those who don't know, my name, Hiya, has the meaning 'Heart' in my mother tongue and language. So, as my name silently suggests, being a soulful empath with a sensitive spirit, I tend to feel everything too deeply ~ and thus, sense the aura of deeper frequencies ...
 

 

Premiere Contest WinnerI Am that I Am

"a heartbeat pulsating as living light
free from each and every limitation
I Am that dwelling in unbound delight
the source wherefrom arises creation”
 

O, ethereal emperor of my poem, read me... as my initials shape the cosmos , the energetic essence of this eucalyptus heart and I spill stars on the perfumed pages , that never leave the diary of d i v i n i t y and d r e a m s ... there is no sacred warmth without the sun, thus, on the lips of the sky, I sleep with hope ~ in my humble honeysuckle heaven ~ listen, karma-reapers, sipping sins from kismet life is a yoga, my meditative muse, and I yeild no jealousy from the yarn of jewels, that soaks not the silence of my soul. I have no confession, no explanation, I am answerable to the amethyst starlight, that sleeps in the kundalini of loyal truths for, what remains in the silhouette of the spirit, if not something, inked with empathetic elixirs breathless ... ageless ... limitless ... boundless in the bonded petals, like the blizzard of bougainvillia butterflies ~ the one born from those blessed brushstrokes, where, unfurled within fluent flames by a sage-spun saint, I am a saffron soprano , a line of l o v e ... laced with the last star I am that I am, but I am no more ~ because all that lives has a pulse of light, but I a m o n e with the source a feeler, fond of the alchemy of Almighty ... and his elysian flower-fused footprints ...
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Ray Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 7:52 PM
At one with the Cosmic Wind.....dancing in the breath of Creation....life has no higher attainment....exactly
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 9:09 PM
Dear Hiya, a belated congratulations 🎉 to you on your win with this gloriously inspired poetry. I loved the theme of this contest also. It was one of my favorites ever sponsored by Unseeking Seeker. It's obvious how much the prompt he gave you hed your beautiful ❤️ heart. Also. Thanks so much for my win in your recently judged contest. 🕊️🌹🌙
Chutani Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 12:21 PM
Hiya, a pouring out of your heart in such a soulful manner...merging with light/its source...ultimate moksha... extremely sensitive to all that happens around...achieving the divine...beyond the material and visible. Congratulations.👏🎉
Borg Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 11:08 AM
With metaphors and alliterations galore, this poem I adore. Congratulations on a beautiful and imaginative poem and a deserved Trophy win.
George Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 9:05 PM
"I am that I am, but I am no more ~ because all that lives has a pulse of light, but I a m o n e with the source "- This merging with the source of all light and your identity amalgamating completely with the Supreme being is the most vital moment of actualization, a glorious moment when you and the creator are one. 🔥❤️The second time I read this poem, the greater is my enjoyment of it. Back to Congratulate you dear on your well deserved trophy win.👍👏
Jones Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 9:31 AM
Wow! Your wonderful win is due to the skill and reach of this emotive write! Congratulations Hiya! Also thanks for your warm words on my poem. I tried to respond on it but couldn’t because of a glitch. Love and light blessings to you!
Poet Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 8:35 AM
Hearty congratulations on your wonderful trophy win with your exceptional and heartfelt poem with magnific metaphor layers and stunning imagery.
Anaya Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 9:42 PM
Back with congratulations 🎉👏 on a fab 🏆 win! "I am that I am, but I am no more". 👣. Blessings🦋
Smith  Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 8:56 PM
This is a luminous, incantatory free-verse meditation on spiritual unity, where sound, spacing, and richly layered imagery enact the poem’s movement toward the source. The alliteration—“honeysuckle heaven,” “karma-reapers,” “saffron soprano”—gives it a chant-like musicality, while the widened typography and ellipses create breaths of reverence and expansion. The recurring light, flower, star, and sacred-energy imagery makes the speaker’s final sense of oneness feel both cosmic and intimate.🕯🌸🌟 Congratulations on your podium win.
Maverick Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 11:58 PM
I see you reside in the southern hemisphere Hiya...Or have done? A really Sparkling poem from yourself btw, a lot if bright metaphors, to delight.'
Gibbons Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 12:35 AM
Wow my dear friend loving sweet Hiya this is absolutely divinely a masterpiece of love, hope, devotion. You ooze love in every line in every word. Can't pick out fav points as its all fabulously inspired write ✍️ from your heart n soul touched my heart n soul too. BIG FAV from me to u 💓 💛 💗 💕 💖 keep shinning the light with your powerful life changing words ✨️ 🔥🌙🫂💋🦄🦋🎶 hugs forever friend 🧡 a fab contender for comp
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 5:25 AM
Hey there Hiya, this one feels like a deeply mystical exploration of identity and spirituality, and follows on from Seekers prompt quite seamlessly, I particularly enjoyed the movement toward surrendering the individual self and becoming “one with the source, (if only I could achieve such a state, perhaps someday) 🤔 your closing lines leave the poem with a powerful sense of transcendence and unity, Another great one for this particular contest, I don’t envy the Seeker judging this one, cheers David
DiMino Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 10:21 PM
"I am a saffron soprano , a line of l o v e ... laced with the last star" -- Love that! "because all that lives has a pulse of light, but I a m o n e with the source" -- Beautiful truth!
Crandall Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 8:47 PM
a lovely effusion of poetry!
George Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 4:28 AM
" ...........I am a saffron soprano , a line of l o v e ... laced with the last star" Ahhhhh---- I am in love with every line of this poem. This is so heartfelt, flowing from the inner core of your being. I can sense your heart (Hiya) free of all jealousy, full of love. You make small people feel big through your comments. I always enjoy your detailed comments, giving my simple poems added importance. Thanks dear.🙏 "I am answerable to the amethyst starlight, that sleeps in the kundalini of loyal truths ". If you feel such an accountability, you won't do anything against your conscience. Your spirituality flows quietly beneath the surface rather than declaring it aloud. Its subtlety is its greatest merit. A tender piece showing your consecration to the Source of all light. This has an ethereal aura about it. Into my FAV.❤️🔥👍
Lane Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Sometimes, what glitters really is gold, like what you've so beautifully written in your lines, Hiya. What you spill on parchment in your poetry shine as brightly as stardust falling from celestial skies. Even as just a pulse of light your poetry is brighter than most here.
Anaya Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 9:37 AM
Only your🏮Hiya, [heart] & soul, 🫀script an I Am so becoming, so apropos for the dear Unseeking Seeker master, 🫸🫷 In Kundalini spirit & ☯️ narrative, like a scholar, you are wise for your years... there's: rhythmic flow•musicality• mood•alliteration•inspiration, oh the inspiring way your precious pen glides along~ 👣"I a m o n e with the source a feeler, fond of the alchemy of Almighty ... and his elysian flower-fused footprints ..." Because we are 1-w/ the source on the path to righteousness. Excellence exudes the page poetess. ✨Warmest wishes, Anaya~🌺
Kerr Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 5:34 AM
Hiya, You push boundaries of creative poetic elegance that most mere aspirants can merely fantasize about. Your shrouds of shrewd lyrical resonance founded on unique turns of phrase everlasting. Among many I approve of - “energetic essence of eucalyptus heart, “ and “in my humble honeysuckle heaven.”❤️🔥❤️‍🩹 Your inspiring prose a monument. I appreciate your heartfelt indepth commentary on my latest submission. I’ll keep writing as best I can - your wish is my command. Warm wishes, H
Empress Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 5:10 AM
Pleasure reading you today ~ This should score high! Sending you light always 🧜‍♀️ 🏝️ 🧚 💋
Empress Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 5:09 AM
I was in the mood to Touch this line of enquiry too as been in so much pain and I desperately was in need of some light 🥱 and I must say Yours says something a bit different to what I said but we got the essence and its not surprising that we both used similar words as always ~ I really love the seamless nature of your alliterations too! There are too many lines i love! And also I am in awe of your names meanin! How beautiful! Heartbeat! Awwn! O Hiya! You weave such love! Wow "listen, karma-reapers, sipping sins from kismet life is a yoga, my meditative muse" yes tell them!
Empress Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 5:06 AM
This is so beautiful dear Hiya. I absolutely love the confidence and energy of this poem, and how it feels like you know who you are. Its just seamless with so many stunning metaphors and alliterations too! I especially love the lines "I have no confession, no explanation, I am answerable to the amethyst starlight" wow! Thats soul hitting and quite powerful! I also love "I am that I am, but I am no more ~ because all that lives has a pulse of light, but I a m o n e with the source " wow brilliant ending
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