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I am a deep blue winding river cutting my own path through time. One Liner- contest October5 2016

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 2/7/2017 1:17:00 AM

:) Amazing verse. Very interesting imagery. -JWE

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/7/2017 11:53:00 AM

Thank you, JW:)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/7/2016 7:33:00 PM

Daniel i like this short poem that you wrote. I am having a problem submitting a poem.I have tried 4 times and it did not go through. so I did another and it did go through. but not my other one. Why did it not work out? I will try again to see what happens. Maybe I will be lucky.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/7/2016 8:00:00 PM

I got lucky this time and got through. Thank you anyway.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/24/2016 5:51:00 PM

I can identify with this. Nice!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/24/2016 8:40:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. That's good to know. I like learning about the people I talk to:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2016 7:46:00 PM

wonderfully metaphorical. Love it, Danny

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/10/2016 7:09:00 PM

Thank you sweetie. I'm so glad you liked it:)

Jean Murray

Date: 10/8/2016 4:49:00 AM

Way to go Daniel. Deep.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/8/2016 4:24:00 PM

Indeed. We seven siblings just spent the day together for the first time since Mum's funeral, six years ago. Wonderful.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/8/2016 8:17:00 AM

Thank you, Jean. Not to deep for you to wade in. LOL I simply love your beautiful smile, Jean. I am grateful for your friendly visits and hope you are having a wonderful weekend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/7/2016 11:55:00 AM

Powerful like the waters of the river dear, Daniel! Keep cutting your unique path through life creating thus your destiny! A seven!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/7/2016 12:22:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios. I am nearing the end of my course and am looking forward to the "sea of souls" my friend. I appreciate your kind comments and high marks:)

Paloma P

Date: 10/7/2016 11:31:00 AM

So, apparently you excel at one liners! :) I meant to say kudos on you win.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/7/2016 12:20:00 PM

Thank you, Paloma. Ah, but you hardly know me. I appreciate your kindness and your support. Paloma in English means "dove" What a beautiful name:)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/6/2016 10:44:00 PM

I see this was a win! It was a well deserving one at that. I love the imagery and the honesty I read in this monoku.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/7/2016 12:17:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen. You are such a sweet friend. I appreciate your kind comments and thoughtfulness:)

Carole Duet

Date: 10/6/2016 8:58:00 PM

Hi Daniel! What a wonderful description...and true I'm sure.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/7/2016 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, Carole. Grab a raft and I'll take you for a ride:) I appreciate your kind comments and support.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2016 2:09:00 PM

Hi Daniel, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/7/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis. You are so sweet. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/6/2016 8:57:00 AM

That's a description of a thoughtful man.... Congrats Daniel, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/6/2016 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, Teddy. My cover has been blown. Lol I appreciate your kindness:)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/6/2016 8:44:00 AM

Great line-great win! Congrats Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/6/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, John. I appreciate your kindness:)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/6/2016 12:08:00 AM

Now, this is what I call the perfect one liner:) a 7 and a fave:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/6/2016 7:44:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. You are so sweet. I appreciate the love and the high praise.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 10/5/2016 9:57:00 PM

This is a great poetic one liner... Good luck with the contest...

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/5/2016 10:57:00 PM

Thank you Dear Supraja. You are very kind. I appreciate your continued support, It's nice to share a smile:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/5/2016 8:36:00 PM

You are indeed powerful!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/5/2016 8:55:00 PM

You're too kind, Richard. Thank you so much for your supporting comments. I am but a river, you are a tidal wave!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/5/2016 7:07:00 PM

ooh - very nicely said, daniel! i'm impressed!

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/5/2016 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Mrs Ilene. I see you are easily impressed. Lol Seriously, I am grateful for your kind comments and support. You are a sweet lady.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/5/2016 3:00:00 PM

Hi Daniel, You said so much in a few words. It was so poetic as well and the picture was lovely. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -) Alexis

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/5/2016 4:21:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis. You are too kind. I really am grateful you dropped by to share your smile. I appreciate your kind comments and support.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/5/2016 10:29:00 AM

Beautifully figuratively said ... Lovely poetic one liner ...

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/5/2016 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, Probir. You are very kind. I appreciate your time and your support.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/5/2016 9:35:00 AM

Really good DT. You inspired me to try one.

Daniel Turner
Date: 10/5/2016 9:41:00 AM

Tim. I see you as a soiled dove. Lol Thanks for friendly visits:)