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Tim Smith

Date: 10/6/2015 4:27:00 PM

Rereading these beautiful lines. hugs xx

Sandip Goswami

Date: 5/28/2015 10:56:00 PM

Super thoughts...Brilliant note...Your note is a great poem "I always wished to be a domesticated Rose,but somehow I know I will always be a daisy".... Best to you from my heart dear....

Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:21:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/23/2015 12:26:00 PM

A well composed poem with an emotional release finding its way into our hearts. Emile. #7

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 5/20/2015 3:42:00 PM

A beautiful write from a beautiful soul....your verse does amaze Charmaine; faving this! Keith:-)

Md Johnson

Date: 5/15/2015 9:36:00 AM

This write gives hope for the daisy. In a field of roses, I think one will always go for the daisy. Nicely written.

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/14/2015 9:24:00 AM

Another beauty from you Charma, have to admit you made me smile throughout this gem ;) love and hugs Wilma

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/14/2015 6:51:00 AM

I prefer Daisies over Roses. You can't look at a daisy and not break out in a smile. Great poem Charmaine.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/12/2015 9:13:00 AM

Your soft mellow write....gentle and sweet...signature you. Don't change, Charmaine. Your writing is so beautiful. Hugs

Kash Poet

Date: 5/8/2015 10:44:00 PM

Beautiful!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/7/2015 8:15:00 AM

That was REALLY cool! I came over to wish you a belated birthday... and found the origional Daisy... herself!... I'm more like a lilac... Me and my menagerie stay clumped in a group of little parts... We're not much to look at alone... But gain momentum when together... Happy Belated Birthday!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/8/2015 4:38:00 AM

Awawaw!!!Thanks for the lovely greetings..A big hug x

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2015 12:45:00 PM

you are a rare daisy!.. enchanted by your picturesque words, charms.. ohh, please join the contest.. huggs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/6/2015 5:30:00 AM

Wow, this poem flows like hot butter across sauteing mushooms. Beautifully done.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/5/2015 5:02:00 PM

This is really lovely, Charm!! This unpretentious margarita could so easily be a romantic and contest winner! // Thank you for reading and commenting on my senryu "Love is Free". // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2015 12:30:00 PM

A delightful read shame you are not submitting it to the contest:-( Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 5/5/2015 9:21:00 AM

A delightful read! I remember, years ago, picking the petals of the daisy. He loves me, he loves me not.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/4/2015 6:28:00 PM

The Margarita daisy does describe you well...Your dawn will glow once more Charma....hugs Tim