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I Aim To Entertain You

I
Love
Writing
Poetry
My words flow freely
Once my brain gets into the groove
If possible I try my best to write with humour 
Because laughter is the best medicine … and it is much cheaper than a prescription!


3~08~15
Contest – Fibonacci – Rob Carmack
Checked with how many syllables 1 1 2 3 5 8 13 21
~awarded 15th place~

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/20/2015 10:43:00 PM Jan, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 3/17/2015 6:09:00 PM Back to say congrats, Jan! Love, Kim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/17/2015 6:10:00 PM Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2015 9:49:00 AM Way to go with winner.Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2015 12:00:00 PM Thanks Sara:-) Hugs janxx

William Gray Date: 3/16/2015 3:24:00 AM Great write Jan, your word brighten up my day!.- Best Regards my friend!. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2015 8:40:00 AM Thanks William:-) Hugs jan xx

Skat A Date: 3/15/2015 11:45:00 PM Jan, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/16/2015 1:53:00 AM Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Theresa Stephens Date: 3/15/2015 12:47:00 PM Hi Jan, How true! Enjoyable read, All the best Theresa xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/15/2015 12:48:00 PM Thanks Theresa:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 3/15/2015 8:08:00 AM Hi Jan, congrats on your win; pity you did not leave out a line or two, otherwise this could easily have made it to the top four!:) [am I funny...sarcastic...or plain cruel!:)] Hugs /// paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/15/2015 8:34:00 AM I NOW understand the sponsor doesn't like cliches so I will pick my self off the floor wipe away my tears and try again:-) Hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/15/2015 4:09:00 AM well well sweet Jan you sure know well.. :D! weeeeee! hugs! Stay blessed! :)//olive eloisa Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/15/2015 5:55:00 AM Thanks Olive was delighted to see you and James sharing the top step - lovely to see some different names hitting the top spot:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/15/2015 1:11:00 AM That's true Jan! Quite an uplifting one, big congrats! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/15/2015 5:55:00 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) congrats to you again:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 3/14/2015 9:45:00 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win. a 7 blessings dear friend Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2015 9:54:00 PM Thanks so much Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 3/12/2015 4:25:00 PM I always know where to go when I need a smile. I actually like the centering, although I've never seen a Fibonacci centered. This reminds me of a water fountain. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/12/2015 4:38:00 PM It's my first attempt at the poem - I will amend it to be not centered - don't want to fall foul of the rules lol but will center it again after the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman Date: 3/12/2015 1:41:00 PM Jan, you like to write with humor and I like to read humorous writes so that makes us a good pair! I like this! Love, Kim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/12/2015 1:43:00 PM Thanks so much Kim I do try and write humourous poems whenever i can - I was still posting funny writes when dad died a few weeks ago:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser Date: 3/10/2015 4:28:00 PM Laughter and prescriptions cost nothing in Scotland, and this Highlander has received some fantastic medicine this evening reading your poetry Jan. Wishing this little gem all the best in the contest, hugs//James xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2015 4:29:00 PM Thanks James we have to pay for prescriptions but less than £4. Thanks for all your support I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet Date: 3/10/2015 12:34:00 PM A personal and up close look into the private life of the author. You have mastered this poetic form. Emile. #7 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2015 2:28:00 PM Thank you for that delightful comment Emile:-) Hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker Date: 3/10/2015 12:22:00 PM Hi Jan! Cute picture. Very nice msg. Great structure. GL in contest. Take care. Earl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2015 2:27:00 PM Thanks so much Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/10/2015 9:13:00 AM You are the master of humour my dear! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2015 11:37:00 AM Aww thanks Richard I do try to amuse if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/9/2015 6:16:00 PM Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2015 2:11:00 AM Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2015 4:35:00 PM Excellent choice in your topic. WEll done, my friend! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2015 2:10:00 AM Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight Date: 3/9/2015 4:07:00 PM Hi Jan, so wonderfully written with great optimism, especially in the last line. GL in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/10/2015 2:10:00 AM Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France Date: 3/9/2015 10:17:00 AM Jan, simply wonderful from the picture to the words, I admire that you can bring such beauty and mirth to your poems and thanks for visiting my poetry. . . Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/9/2015 10:21:00 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley Date: 3/9/2015 10:04:00 AM Great verse, Jan. And it's nice to see an accompanying self portrait- I think I imagined you looking like that in the first place. Good luck, love, hugs, squiffy warm stuff, etc. Viv x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/9/2015 10:06:00 AM Ha ha ha Thanks Mr Viv:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/9/2015 8:18:00 AM Fully agree, dear Jan! Laughter is better than many prescriptions! Ha-ha! Enjoyed it! Good luck! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/9/2015 10:06:00 AM Thanks Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward Date: 3/9/2015 3:03:00 AM It's not a hard form at all, is it Jan? Hugs, Julia, xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/9/2015 10:05:00 AM No I enjoyed it Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper Date: 3/8/2015 5:04:00 PM If laughter is the best medicine then my friend you are a leading specialist. No matter how down i feel all i have to do is read one of your poems and i smile. I think you have a winner for the comp. love Shane xxx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/8/2015 5:06:00 PM Thanks Shane it is a first attempt for me with this form - but the subject was an easy choice:-) Hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Date: 3/8/2015 4:42:00 PM Hey Jan, this is good. Laugh and the world will laugh with you, cry and....you know the rest. Good luck. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/8/2015 4:47:00 PM So true Abdul and hopefully we can make people smile though our words :-) Hugs Jan xx

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