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I Love Writing Poetry My words flow freely Once my brain gets into the groove If possible I try my best to write with humour Because laughter is the best medicine … and it is much cheaper than a prescription! 3~08~15 Contest – Fibonacci – Rob Carmack Checked with how many syllables 1 1 2 3 5 8 13 21 ~awarded 15th place~

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Date: 3/22/2015 11:01:00 AM
Jan, this write is why you are one of my favorite poets.. I adore you and crave your humor!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/23/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Dave I have taken a few days break just catching up on my comments:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/20/2015 10:43:00 PM
Jan, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/17/2015 6:09:00 PM
Back to say congrats, Jan! Love, Kim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/17/2015 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/16/2015 9:49:00 AM
Way to go with winner.Congrats..Sara
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2015 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) Hugs janxx
Date: 3/16/2015 3:24:00 AM
Great write Jan, your word brighten up my day!.- Best Regards my friend!.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks William:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/15/2015 11:45:00 PM
Jan, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/16/2015 1:53:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/15/2015 12:47:00 PM
Hi Jan, How true! Enjoyable read, All the best Theresa xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/15/2015 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Theresa:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/15/2015 8:08:00 AM
Hi Jan, congrats on your win; pity you did not leave out a line or two, otherwise this could easily have made it to the top four!:) [am I funny...sarcastic...or plain cruel!:)] Hugs /// paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/15/2015 8:34:00 AM
I NOW understand the sponsor doesn't like cliches so I will pick my self off the floor wipe away my tears and try again:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/15/2015 4:09:00 AM
well well sweet Jan you sure know well.. :D! weeeeee! hugs! Stay blessed! :)//olive eloisa
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/15/2015 5:55:00 AM
Thanks Olive was delighted to see you and James sharing the top step - lovely to see some different names hitting the top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/15/2015 1:11:00 AM
That's true Jan! Quite an uplifting one, big congrats!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/15/2015 5:55:00 AM
Thanks Dr Sharma:-) congrats to you again:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/14/2015 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win. a 7 blessings dear friend
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Date: 3/14/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/12/2015 4:25:00 PM
I always know where to go when I need a smile. I actually like the centering, although I've never seen a Fibonacci centered. This reminds me of a water fountain.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2015 4:38:00 PM
It's my first attempt at the poem - I will amend it to be not centered - don't want to fall foul of the rules lol but will center it again after the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 3/12/2015 1:41:00 PM
Jan, you like to write with humor and I like to read humorous writes so that makes us a good pair! I like this! Love, Kim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/12/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim I do try and write humourous poems whenever i can - I was still posting funny writes when dad died a few weeks ago:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 3/10/2015 4:28:00 PM
Laughter and prescriptions cost nothing in Scotland, and this Highlander has received some fantastic medicine this evening reading your poetry Jan. Wishing this little gem all the best in the contest, hugs//James xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2015 4:29:00 PM
Thanks James we have to pay for prescriptions but less than £4. Thanks for all your support I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/10/2015 12:34:00 PM
A personal and up close look into the private life of the author. You have mastered this poetic form. Emile. #7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2015 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for that delightful comment Emile:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/10/2015 12:22:00 PM
Hi Jan! Cute picture. Very nice msg. Great structure. GL in contest. Take care. Earl
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/10/2015 9:13:00 AM
You are the master of humour my dear!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2015 11:37:00 AM
Aww thanks Richard I do try to amuse if I can:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2015 6:16:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/10/2015 2:11:00 AM
Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2015 4:35:00 PM
Excellent choice in your topic. WEll done, my friend!
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:10:00 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2015 4:07:00 PM
Hi Jan, so wonderfully written with great optimism, especially in the last line. GL in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:10:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2015 10:17:00 AM
Jan, simply wonderful from the picture to the words, I admire that you can bring such beauty and mirth to your poems and thanks for visiting my poetry. . .
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/9/2015 10:21:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2015 10:04:00 AM
Great verse, Jan. And it's nice to see an accompanying self portrait- I think I imagined you looking like that in the first place. Good luck, love, hugs, squiffy warm stuff, etc. Viv x
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/9/2015 10:06:00 AM
Ha ha ha Thanks Mr Viv:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 3/9/2015 8:18:00 AM
Fully agree, dear Jan! Laughter is better than many prescriptions! Ha-ha! Enjoyed it! Good luck!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/9/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/9/2015 3:03:00 AM
It's not a hard form at all, is it Jan? Hugs, Julia, xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/9/2015 10:05:00 AM
No I enjoyed it Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2015 10:38:00 PM
Great Fibonacci ! Hugs today my friend .... Good luck in the contest !!! Bev :)
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/9/2015 3:06:00 AM
Don't forget to visit my poetry, Bev. The invitation still stands. I wrote a nice Haiku yesterday called "a simple flower".
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